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GREAT!! i must say the best story i've ever read here, seriously, your hard work shows and all your fans truly appreciate it. keep up the great work and i can't wait for the next update :)

Another awesome chapter! I look forward to when the two of them finally cave to each other. I also look forward to Sasuke (and the rest of the men in Konoha) having their tongues unfurl when they see her again, only to realize they missed out. Burn baby, burn! lol You have poor Kakashi in so deep, there is no way he's EVER gonna get over his lust for her. And Sakura is becoming more and more knowledgeable. I had thought that the guy she had was actually scoping out girls for whoever is stealing them. Hence his sketches and pause when she mentioned transporting beautiful women. When you first mentioned the sketches, I thought it might be Sai sent to check up on them and make sure everything is ok since they've been gone so long. It'd be an interesting development to have one of the Konoha boys show up on a mission to make sure everything is ok and get a full dose of the new Sakura.

Not the direction I was expecting it to go, which makes things all the better. Thanks for a great story thus far, and have fun in California.

Hey this isnt smut, this is very tasteful adult fanfiction. HAve you seen some of the pokemon stories? Now thats smut, misty being raped by a tenticrule *nodnod* This is a refreshing change from the crap most people half ass around here, you are a true genius and the only one I will stay up and read after a long day of working and being tired as hell. ^^ I love this story with all of my heart. <3

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I so love this fiction. So much. I like the mild smut you add as well.
I can't wait for more! I hope they realize they both want each other soon. X3

I'm not much of a het reader, but I literally check every day to see if this fic has been updated. I love it. KakaSaku is my secret OTP. And keep up all of the good work, I'm loving it. :)

I've loved the entire fic so far, so the excellence of this chapter is no surprise. The smut was indeed good, but the part that impressed me most was your setup and explanation of the jutsus. That's my favorite part of any Naruto fanfic--when writers use known jutsus in a believable way AND get all the details right. You made those scenes very real both visually and tactilely. I also agree with your decision to have Sakura look under Kakashi's mask. It could have come off as a breach of his trust, but Sakura (as you wrote her) didn't take it too far. Instead, it made me feel like it evened the scales in their relationship, somewhat. I've admired your writing in this all along, but I'm commenting now because you're at the point where many writers would be losing the thread of the story and adding in extraneous detail, but you've only gotten stronger as this fic has progressed. I hope you've enjoyed writing this as much as I've enjoyed reading it. Thank you.

Whoa.......
You know you are a great writer.You wrote Sakura fictionally blowing Kakashi's mind and that other guy.You had me so into the story that it ended I was sad .Your story really has a hook to it.
Love it.Write more soon.
^Dei Dei

Oh I TOTALLY didn't see that coming! Poor Kakashi, you really broke my heart over him this chapter. You write him really well. Can't wait to read more from you soon ^^

I <3 it! I want more!