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This is so exciting XD I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon >.<

Well I've just finished the story up to chapter 8, taking up 5 hours of my time. I've got to say though, that was one of the most worthwhile 5 hours I've ever spent reading. Brilliant writing that really captures the innocence of Sakura and the abrupt situation she is thrust into. All the characters all believable, and I love the way you are handling the shift between Kakashi and Sakura. To be honest, I really can't think of a way to improve your writing; I'm sure others who are more qualified can, but I think you have a natural talent and knack for creative writing. This has been one of the few fiction pieces on AFF that have really made a lasting impact on my mind, and I thank you for it. On another note, I visited your livejournal today, and am truly sorry about your current situation. I hope it all improves for you, and good luck for final exams =)

A good start indeed. This story was definetly lengthy. You weaved an interesting story non the less.

Chapter 8

That great chapter. Sakura lap dance was pretty good.

I don't think I've reviewed this before, but I've been following it for the last few chapters. I really love the idea, and you're a really good writer! It's nice to see a story that's hot with a plot. (Which sounds really silly now that it managed to rhyme itself, lol)

Keep writing, I look forward to the next chapter!

Hey. Just wanted to let you know that as a fellow writer, I can appreciate the fact that there are people like you out there who put the effort in to make a DECENT story. I've thoroughly enjoyed reading this fic, and I just wanted to say congrats on a stellar piece of work.

Cheers.

Great story I really want to see how far kakashi is willing to go even though his thoughts are trying to push him to actaully wanting a lap dance its a great story please write more!

I'm totally loving the sexual tension between Sakura and Kakashi. I really hope we get to see more of them together down the line. Also, one thing that struck me as off about it is that I don't think Sakura would be entirely uncomfortable being naked around just the girls. Japan is the land of onsen and public baths. Sure you're self conscious at first, but after 5 minutes of being in a room/bath full of naked women, it rubs off. I think she would be much more self conscious in front of men. But nudity in general isn't as big a deal in Japan as it is in more heavily Christian countries.

Wow. This is something really original, and i can bet that you've put alot of work into it. I've been sitting here reading it for the past 3 hours, and it's almost 1AM! A fave of mine, no doubt about it!

wow
nice updatee, babe
Sakura is definately comming along nicely
her initail extreme case of nievete (sp?) in the begining was kind of annoying
it's great to see her becomming much more confident and aware
I really hope that in the end when she goes back to Konoha
she shows Sasuke exactly what he's been missing
any who
can't wait to see what'll happen next!
'til next time, babe~!
:3