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by emeraldfire84

person Mizu Bushin
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay a new chapter, I'm so happy! Poor Sakura, I'd be too embarrassed to dance like that, I'm glad she made it through alright. It SNOWED today for crying out loud. Reading the new chapter made me feel better. Here's hoping for a new chapter soon!
person moodymel
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter! Kakashi finally got to see Sakura dance. I liked the fact that he had a hard time keeping his eyes off of her. Maybe that will help them to become "closer" a lot quicker.
person Mademoiselle
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this chapter, Sakura did a good job! <3333
person Lunar84
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was nice to see Sakura not fall on her face on her first time dancing. Poor Kakashi jealousy is already rearing it's ugly head. It might not be much now but I'm sure it will be soon. And the sexual tension between these two is so hot! Gah I can't wait for the steamy smutness. Especially, since you write such amazing smutty smut.

Looking forward to more!
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! that's really, really good!
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff as always, J-pop. I can't wait for the next chapter. I wants me some more of Kakashi.
person Imagy
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter, babe~!
I can't wait for Sakura to show her true dancing tallent
and wow everyone there
sooo much anticipation....
but 'til then
tooteloo~! ^o^
person Kaka-kun
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg... I'm in love with your story :D . I can't wait to read the next chapter, keep up the awesome work!!!
person shetland
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to see how kakashi is going to keep his focus on the mission with sakura dancing
person puppydog
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep it coming, that was great!