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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are such a tease!!!!
that was so steamy, I cant wait for more!
that was so steamy, I cant wait for more!
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-Drools... a lot-
Wow... I am really loving this story. I agree with it being too soon for the lemony bits. I love stories that draw the plot and all that out, giving it more depth rather than "they meet, they talk, they do a little of this, then they screw". And you write so well. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Wow... I am really loving this story. I agree with it being too soon for the lemony bits. I love stories that draw the plot and all that out, giving it more depth rather than "they meet, they talk, they do a little of this, then they screw". And you write so well. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. Wow. Every chapter gets better and better. I love that you're taking things slowly but not too slow. And I must say the ending of the chapter was superb! WOW WOW WOW. I really have nothing to say that is in any way helpful I'm sorry. My brain is mush now. Maybe by the next chapter I'll have something else to say ^_^
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you, putting a lemon here would not have been the right time. I am loving the build up of tension between these two. I really enjoyed this chapter.
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, poor Kakashi he has to live with the fact of his student's rising sexuality. Great job, I hope next chapter will be the arrival at the club it should be interesting. How will Sakura handle the lustful men? We'll Kakashi actually get jelous? Can't wait!
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is probably getting repetitive but I love your story! Great chapter once again... definitely hot with just the right amount of tension. :P
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet, a new chapter! Woot! Thanks J-Pop! Poor Sakura, so confused. I can't wait to see her reaction to the clothes she's gonna have to wear.
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*crosses legs*
Wait...that was /tame/? Holy shit!
Wait...that was /tame/? Holy shit!
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you call this tame? Damn!
I have to say this is the most interesting story I have ever read for Sakura/Kakashi.
Keep up with the great work. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
I have to say this is the most interesting story I have ever read for Sakura/Kakashi.
Keep up with the great work. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most interesting KakaSaku fic's ive read. the entire plot is different and welcome, nothing trite or overdone, just a thought that definatley works for the tone of this story. I have no constructive critisizm to offer whatsoever, i don't think i could even get picky on grammaticals lol.
this is stellar and i hope you update soon!
this is stellar and i hope you update soon!