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for Stripped Bare

by emeraldfire84

person Anon
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i liked it. i hope you update to the 4th chapter real soon. cause this story is getting hella interestin. real talk. i hope you update soon tho
person Mizu Bushin
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another chapter J-Pop! Your writing is AWESOME! Hurry up and write more? *hopeful*
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really a good fanfiction. I'm just a little curious of when we'll get to see Sakura as a stripper...heeheehee, but all in all it's really good!! Whoohoo!! Wet Kakashi!! HOT! Just the image of a dirty and wet Kakashi could make any girl pass out into a pool of her own drool and noseblood from nosebleedage.

Anywho!! Please update soonish!! ^.^

person Lunar84
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another amazing chapter!!!! I love when you update, because you give us long in depth chapters that give us just enough but yet leave us still begging for more.

The lap dance scene was perfect. I honestly don't think it could have been written better. I enjoyed the fact that although Sakura felt awkward she was still naturally sexy. So it wasn't too humiliating for the poor girl. I LOVED Kakashi's reaction ^_^ Sexual tension FTW!!

I'm so excited for the next update. I know you said it might be a little longer between updates. But, I know that it will be worth the wait!
person eileen
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's really great, you are a talented writer. I am not a fan of Kakashi/Sakura but thanks to your story, I am starting to like this couple/ I love how you make them interact and keep them well in character. I can't wait to see the next chapters.
person Geda
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story very much. Please continue to update it. ^^
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. Oh the embarrassment of the whole situation.
person Poecilia
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo, an update! ^__^ This is one of my favorite stories in progress.

Poor guys... At least when girls get worked up we can hide it easier. Though I suppose a girl with a goal can use that to her advantage; it's pretty easy to tell when he likes what you're doing. Twitching in his nethers = I should do that again. :D :P

Is Sakura going to have to learn other things beside naked lap wiggling and dancing? I'm not quite sure what you have in mind for the "services" the strip club will provide, but the acquisition of other skills could have interesting possibilities.
person Ryo
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Chapter 3. ^_^ That was rather interesting with Sakura's lap dance and Kakashi getting aroused.
I can't wait for the 4th chapter. Please, update soon!
person puppydog
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far! Keep it up! Go lap dance! Whooooooooooo!