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yeah... this what im talking about... nice plot... well constructed story... even thou a lemon has the feeling of a great fanfic... not the feeling of a porn fic... a nice lemon story... why people won´t writte this kind of plots more often?

Another great chapter. I love your writing style. The way you portray Sakura is awesome. Her frustration with those thugs was great!(Even though i would have loved to see her pound them into the ground.) Keep it up!

Wow. What a way to end a chapter! Love it! I can't wait for the next update. I really hope Sakura isn't too awful at her lap dance. I can feel the sexual tension starting to build. I know this fic is going to be HAWT HAWT HAWT ^_^

wonderful, darlin'~!
way to keep the ball rolling in the relationship department
can't wait to see what happens next!
ooooh, this is so exciting~~!

as always, what another great chapter. :)

can't wait for the next update!

Alsome Chapter! Cant wait to find out what happens next!

I freaking love this story! KakaSaku is the only het couple I can actually enjoy and reading the summary got me really interested. *laughs* I read all the chapters just now and might I say totally not a waste of time and was worth all my yelling at people to stop IMing while I read :D

This story is just too perfect! So perfectly in character and written so flawlessly, everything just flows so perfectly *giggles* Kinda makes me just as awkward feeling as Sakura is, poor thing :}

Looking forward to the update, but I must ask that you please e-mail me when you do update because I am horrible at keeping track of updates XD Please and thank you! My e-mail addresses are on my profile if you can do that.

^____^ Great story!

I personally have not found anything wrong in the story. Sakura beig so naive got on my nerves at first but this chapter fixed that all right up. Loved the tension during the strip tease and I love the thugs, perfect way to make everything okay. I am looking forward to the moment when kakashi see's her all dolled up stripping. And as a suggestion. Strippers are very nice and though there are mean ones throw in a few good ones to help sakura, so she can really knock kakashi's socks off. You know, a trick or two he didn't know about.

Jo.

Absolutely awesome chapter. You are an expert at writing stories that are sensual and sexy but not sleazy. This story is great!

Great job as always. I love how you showed their thoughts and feelings over the akwardness of the situation. The story is moving at a good pace and you writting is excellent. My sister even got into the fanfiction and she isn't a big Naruto fan. Can't wait to see what happens next!