rate_review Reviews

OH MY GAWD
SHUWEEEET~!
I loved the first two chapters, darlin'
totally believable story line too
fitting it around the characters
so that they wouldn't appear OOC
nice touch
clever
crafty
genius even
and
EXTREMELY enjoyable
can't wait for the next chapter, babe~!
;D

AAWWWWSS!! Poor Naruto, he was only sleeping! hehe, I admit, I'm a NaruSaku lover.
But I like this.. Heehee I can't wait for Sakura to *_* lap dance what here mama gave her! LOL!

This story has quite a bit of potential. Kakashi's reluctance to teach Sakura to be seductive is more convincing than them jumping each other's bones immediately, especially with Sakura's personal space invasion phobia. Dragging it out a bit makes the process interesting and (pleasantly) frustrating for the reader. I look forward to updates. :)

On another note: I think your writing is improving; your recent stories are much better than your older ones. Keep at it! ^_^

Talk about a cliffhanger. Morelike THE PIECE OF INFORMATION THAT HAS YOU CLINGING OFF THE EDGE OF A SLIPPERY MOSSY CLIFF WHILE THERE ARE SHARKS JUST SMIRKING (yes, sharks can smirk... when they want to) AT YOU AND WAITING FOR YOU TO, WELL, FALL TO YOUR DOOM. OF DOOM. *HUG!*

I just love your writing and how you make Sakura someone NOT the usual sexy!and!hot!and!sex-goddess!Sakura (which I don't have anything against, but it's just so... refreshing ^^). Back to the point, your Sakura actually has issues and problems like every other 19 year old, and you write her oh so very well. (From my humble opinion, yours truly XD)
And the interaction with Kakashi is awesome, it promises so much more, mwaha, and I WAVE A FLAG AT YOU AND CAN I LURE YOU TO WRITE WITH CHEETOS AND COOKIES? *GRIN* Oh well, I'd have tried. ^^
Farewell, and walk free, healthy, the world before you? :D
P.S. (*is going to lurk around here* and *I apologize for the length of comment, I fail at life. YOU MADE ME BABBLE, OMG. And, heh, I'm FRENCH, S'NOT LIKE I CAN HELP IT. WE FRENCH PPL ARE OH SO VERY EFFUSIVE.*)
Much love! xoxo

I sense a huge smack coming on!

Yay! Thank you for the update! I'm so happy I'll even forgive you for the cliffhanger. At least I'll try..

OMG you horrible horrible person how dare you leave me hanging like that! I was squeeling like a fan girl in the cookie part! I can't wait till the next part this is certainly getting very interesting.

Please continue this is a great story.

8D oh wow! lmfao! That was good Kakashi, but isn't chocolate bad for dogs? ;) lol, I almost died when he said "Sakura... Your going to have to give me... a lap dance." *cough, weeze, hack, choke-on-cookie* O.O wow, just, wow. Good thing this is Kakashi teachin her, any other guy and he'd be molesting her, and not for teaching purposes X_X; and he's ot a great bod and face! anyways... always- update soon, this is getting to be very interestinc' :3 hehe, lap dance. *giggle snort* I feeling a little immature right now, sorry.

that was just wrong! arrggghhh! I've been waiting for a continuation of some light reading but this has caught my attention. At first I thought, oh brother! when I read the summary but then I saw the talanted author associated with it and I knew it would be good. And I was right! Clever girl! I can't wait to see how this turns out.