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for Stripped Bare

by emeraldfire84

person kinoko *too damn lazy to sign in*
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Definatly a good start! Let me know when you update again, I'm interested in keeping up with this story, looking forward to your next chapter!

♥,
kinoko

kinoko_thelittlemushroom@yahoo.com
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! You do a story really well! I can't wait for more!
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh, i so love it so far and i cannot wait for more hopefully soon. Great beg. good premise, looking forward to more!!
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are off to an awesome start. This is going to be very interesting.
person Lira
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing as always. I'm looking forward to reading your following chapters, and please keep up the good work. Naruto fics like these make me wish you were a Bleach fan.
person angel
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far..got me hooked so you definitely did good. lol

Can't wait to see Sakura being trained by Kakashi. lol
person tamiri
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can not wait to see how Kakashi trains Sakura in the art of being sexy. This is going to create some akward situations. Anyways love you writting and how the characters emotions and thoughts are shown. Keep up the good job!
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for more, is this going to be a kakashi and sakura? I love the way you write them two together. I'll be looking forward to the next chapater.
person Lunar84
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start! When I saw a new story posted by you I was so excited! This fic looks like it's going to be one of your greatest.

I kind of feel bad for Sakura. IT's like she said everyone expects her to suck and to not know what being sexy entails. At least Naruto had faith in her. I can't wait to see how Kakashi goes about showing her how to be seductive. I'm really hoping she is more natural at it than everyone gives her credit for.

Grammar and spelling looked great and the chapter flowed very nicely. It was also nice that it was a longer chapter than what most people post as the first chapter in a new story.

Please update when you can. Looking forward to those lemony good scenes ^_~
person Mizu
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter; this sounds like a great story in the making!