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by emeraldfire84

schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Wonderful chapter as usual! I personally LOVED the suspense! I was sitting on the edge of my seat while they were trying to escape the fire. Very nicely done! Glad to see that Sakura is ok and back to her stubborn self. Lol way to make Team 7 seem like a bunch of misfits even though they're the best team ever! I hope the other girls are gonna be ok. I wonder who the third girl is...Hmmm... As always can't wait for the next chappie ^_^
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think the waiting was the hardest part for that chapter. Man, but am I a sucker for happy endings. Awesome chapter, awesome story, keep it up. (We know you can)
person savvy
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First of all.....THANNNNNKKKKK GOOOODDDDD YOU CAME BACK!!!! i was beginning to lose hope...but never interest
Second of all...WELCOME BACK. i missed your writing and i'm sure I'm not the only one....i was in suspense since before x-mas to find out sakura's fate....now i am highly relieved lol.
I can't wait til you update again and i will be checking!!! good luck in school! i only just finished my midterms, so i get your busy. have fun!!
person moor
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you balanced the pent-up tension in this chapter with the release (Kakashi rescuing Sakura + the other girls), and also the optimism of the rest of the Team 7+ gang showing up. :D After all the romantic love, gruesome fighting & retribution, a bit of Team Love was in order to let them rest their psyches.

Also, I loved Kakashi's last thoughts/lines. (Damnit, he's trying to be so damn noble... Why do I get the feeling Sasuke's going to smack him upside the head to beat some common sense into him? XD)

Thank you for sharing -- good luck with school!
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy to see an update! And to get some relief from the suspense ... speaking of which, I personally thought the suspense in the story was well done. I could nearly feel Kakashi's nerves and his disbelief when Sakura first spoke. Truthfully, this is one of the best fanfictions, all-around, that I have read. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, although I understand the way school can overtake your life (I should at this moment be studying for my Master's exams or writing my Master's essay or grading papers ... but oh well).
person Chimiri
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon!
person Sayuri
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I just recently came across this fic and so far, it's excellent. Though you may have a few typos scattered here and there, the strong plot and coupling certainly make up for it. It's such a shame that it's been so long since your last update. It's been months! Being a fellow college student, I totally understand how time consuming each semester can be, but pleaaaaase try to squeeze in a little fanfic writing :3 Your loyal fans eagerly await the next chapter of Stripped Bare <3 Please keep up the fantastic writing and I hope real life isn't kicking your ass too badly xD

I need more!
Sayuri ^.^
person Sayuri
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I just recently came across this fic and so far, it's excellent. Though you may have a few typos scattered here and there, the strong plot and coupling certainly make up for it. It's such a shame that it's been so long since your last update. It's been months! Being a fellow college student, I totally understand how time consuming each semester can be, but pleaaaaase try to squeeze in a little fanfic writing :3 Your loyal fans eagerly await the next chapter of Stripped Bare. Please keep up the fantastic writing and I hope real life isn't kicking your ass too badly xD

I need more!
Sayuri ^.^

P.S. Sorry for the duplicate. The last post was mysteriously cut off...
person Dark
schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mew! I love this story. I had to read it all and I am dying to find out what happens next. T _ T
person KonanCandy
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! Your chapters are long and well written, the storyline is so descriptive you can see it happen, everything flows together nicely, you are one hell of a writer. I eagerly await your next chapter.