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for Teasing the Edges

by VanityBlake

person Burn-The-Witch
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was certainly intriguing, if not a teensy bit creepy. I'm very much looking forward to reading more on the other characters' POVS, and am wondering just what the "whole story" is with the assassin-for-hire setting. You said if we had suggestions for characters to voice 'em here, so I'd like to suggest Gaara, as he's one of my favorite characters (who you didn't mention you'd be writing about, of course). Ans I think since you've done such an excellent job portraying Sasuke's persona that Gaara would be fascinating and enjoyable to read.

Hope to see an update sometime soon! Best of luck!
person Raineko
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I've never read one like this. You should really update the other chapters, especially the one with Neji.
person Lola
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was interesting. Is Sasuke going to be paired w/an OC? I would like to see Kiba and Shino as assassins, also. Can't wait to see where you go from here :)
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. This was fucking GOLDEN, let me tell you! The sex, so dirty, I loved it- and then Sasuke being the UchiHO he is! being so ready to submit (hope he gets what he needs eventually) and then the twist at the end and he kills them all!!!!! Wow, this is really special (and I'm way to high on sugar, can you tell?) I'll be looking forward to the subsequent chapters.