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for Betrayal and Bonds

by FairyNiamh

person smint45
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is such a wonderful one shot!!!! I really love it!!! I originally didn't like Naru Shika pairings but I start to like them!!!! At least yours!!!! Thank you for this wonderful story!!! See you again!!!
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah Sakura Bashing at it's best here. I liked the SkikaNaru pairing. It's one I haven't really seen much of before, but it was really good. And the Sasuke as an abusive lover was good too. Kudos for a great one-shot!
person mls
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story!!!!!1 I hope there will be more to it!!!!!! You did a great job!!!!!!!!!!
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! ShikaNaru goodness!! Though it would have been nice to read about the reactions when they throw all Sasuke's shit out the window LOL!!
Good Job!!
~Kami~
person a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h.
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the shikamaru>Naruto pairing (it's my favorite) and this was an awesome story. Hah, Sasuke and Sakura got what they deserved. ^_^ Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
person animelover
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, i'm a sasunaru lover as much as the next person, but DANG i luv it when sasu gets his butt kicked! THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! moral of the story, don't lie as it'll come back to bite you. hehehe! if you happen to do a sequel or anything, it would be kinda cool to get the details on sasusaku marriage, shikanaru lemons, and maybe some sasu trying to get naru back stuff.

n e way, cool story!
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*drop kicks Sasuke* Times like this, I really don't like that guy. Wonderful job, Fairy! :-) Shika and Naru are great together.
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say normally I'm a Sasuke and Naruto fan... can't help it, I just am. But, after reading this, I'm all giggly about Shikamaru and Naruto. Too cute! Ideas are running wildly through my mind... must stop it. I have other stories to finish...
Thanks for the great story.
Oh, and cause I love it when people share their favorite lines:
"He was sure that if Gaara had known why Naruto had stopped talking to him he would desert coffin the ice prick so quick that even Kakashi wouldn't be able to follow it with his Sharingan. That thought warmed the deepest and darkest part in Shikamaru's heart."
Perfect... perfect Gaara, perfect Shikamaru.
person drivven
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know, I'm supposed to be writing :P I just wanted to read it again. Thank you. It's lovely!