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for The Canalized River

by susanna

schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I'm so glad Naruto is going to find Sasuke. *Does happy dance*
Can't wait for more.
=)
person Halskr
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another chapter. It is kinda funny about the meeting between Sakura and Naruto. Thanks for clarifying the last bit in the previous chapter. It makes sense now.
person Halskr
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Liked this chapter. I thought the part about good being a matter of perception was well written and thought out. The very last part confused me a bit. The part about sacrificing himself for the sake of his clan and being better than Itachi. I would think it goes a bit further than that. I have always felt Sasuke was after answers in addition to revenge. Why would Itachi betray him? Why did Itachi feel the need to destroy the entire clan. Was everything prior to the massacre and act? Was there ever any real family bonds? It is very hard to accept a member of your family as an evil prick. Trust me, I know how that one feels.
person monrque
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good story
i have been wondering, why is everyone
talking down to Naruto.

the more i read the more upset i get.

and also i wanted to know is this a story of deep friednship
or will they be more (Lovers)

ether way this is a very well thought out.


schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. A peak into the mind of Sasuke.
Can't wait for more.
=)
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is Kakashi completely out of his mind? Naruto can count on one hand how many people actually care! Light half means he'll be loved. Oh my gods, I swear that Jonin is smoking crack or something.
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I love that Kyubi doesn't hate Naruto. Can't wait for Naruto and sasuke to meet. I wonder why they didn't tell Naruto that Sasuke saved him. Well I can guess why but, I'll have to wait to find out for sure.
=)
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwe. that was so cute. I loved Juugo's sad story and how Sasuke tried to comfort him. It seems that Juugo and Naruto have a lot in common.
I can't wait to read more.
=)
person Halskr
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought the fight seen was good. Hopefully, we will be able to read about it from Naruto's POV.
Halskr
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“You know, we can always change direction and search for them and ask them why they have abandoned the pursuit.”
I adored this line because I can just see Suigetsu saying it in a tone that a mother would to their three year old. Cracks me up.
Again I am amazed at how much I like Team Hebi in this. They are brilliant. It's funny that Sasuke surrounds himself with people so intent on needling him.
Oh and when Sasuke says that he would rather wonder why his clan were all meant to die in response to 'did you ever wonder' questions... just another perfect Sasuke moment in my mind. He really is a black and white character. Good/bad. Friend/Enemy. Purpose/Everything else.
Another excellent chapter. ;)