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Crazy awesome chapter. Loved that Sasuke came to help Naruto. Good fight scene. I can't wait find out why Sasuke is no longer on the ground.
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Hmmm... interesting proposistion that Naruto is faced with. How is it that door #2 from all bad guys is always 'death'? ;)
Again... I adore your insight into the relationship that Sasuke and Naruto have. How differently Naruto approached his 'friendship' with Sasuke compared to everyone else. I'm glad to see that someone else thinks of these things.
As far as the 'raven' thing... in manga Itachi turns into a whole bunch of ravens at will... so I alway associate him with the raven... So, I don't really know where I was going with this thought, it's late, I might need sleep, but I'm glad the raven is someone else. :)
Awesome chapter. Until the next...

Really great and imaginative story!

Awwe it's kind of cute the Kyubi has a soft spot for Konoha... kind of. Can't wait to read more.

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Duh, duh, duh! Choices, choices, what will Naruto do? If it came right down to it and he literaly had to join them or die right then, what would he choose? Hmmm. Honestly I wouldn't want him to die, but if he joined sasuke might have a problem with it. ;P A big problem with it.
Great chapter can't wait for more.
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Well, I totally sympathize with Naruto. Part of me agrees with his friends and teachers and yeah, they are helping him out. But the other side is yelling at the injustice of it all. Whenever something goes wrong it is always Naruto that steps up and kicks ass and saves the day. He doesn't need to be saved, coddled or treated like a toddler. Grrrrrrrrrrrr.
Anyway, as always, lovely update.
Until the next.

Can't wait to read more. Things are really getting interesting.
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This is a very well written. You have taken the time to explain the characters and their motivations which really helps when the two characters begin to interact. To many authors leave out the back story, leaving the readers trying to figure out how the main characters arrived at their destination and why they act the way they do. I am curious if this story will continue along with the manga in regards to Jiraya's fate and the battle between Itachi and Sasuke. Following the manga, You can see how both characters are so alike in their backgrounds.

Very interesting. Naruto took the whole thing in stride though, didn't he? All this time he thought it was about Sasuke and really, it doesn't sound as though Sasuke is even ON the priority list.
That said there was so much feeling in this chapter. Poor Naruto. Kakashi was written very well. I like a 'caring' Kakashi even when he's not giving Naruto what he wants.
Can't wait to see where you take us with the next chapter... until then.

This story gets better and better if I do say so myself. What a wonderful chapter. I love the 'team' your building within the Hebi. And poor Sasuke... he thinks Naruto abandoned him... NO! It wasn't Naruto! Stupid teachers, stupid village, stupid Naruto's friends... *Kicks dirt and huffs*
Until the next!