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for The Canalized River

by susanna

schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwee, poor Naruto. He is so alone. No one understands. They all lie to him. Poor, poor Naru-chan.
Great chapter, can't wait for more.
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schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"It's about the Uchiha boy.." Brilliant.
I can't wait for Naruto to ditch all his stupid 'teachers' and 'friends'.
Oh, and I didn't get to review last chapter, but I loved the whole revenage conversation. I was well done. Showed Sasuke's inner moral compass which you hardly ever get to see. And to think that it is probably similar to Naruto's... and they might be the only two.
Can't wait for more.
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting I hope the perverted Sannin will be okay. I can't wait for Naruto and Sasuke to meet.
Can't wait for more.
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schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting chapter. I can't wait until Sasuke and Naruto meet.
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schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting story.
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schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is getting some wake up calls he needed. Keep on with this. Can't wait to see more!
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I look forward to the next chapters; the story sounds very interesting. I love Juugo's response to Sasuke; it is so true that he always rushes madly, blindly and foolishly into facing his brother every single time.
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to the next ch
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schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really good so far, looking forward to reading more.