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yeah finally together and the iceman crackth. i like how sasuke in actiality likes sweets but doesn't eat them in remeberence of his aunt and uncle it shows another side of the old avenger and matyr denying himself (which is so the bible). i am sad cause i guess we are nearing the end you did say that this story was 36 pages long (unlessluclily you extended by some chapter). sometimes the less questions i ask mean that the story chapter had answered them all and possibly some previous ones as any good author would (that would be you) and tighned up the loose ends. i can't wait to see the enxt chapter.

I love this story, but it is so detail and so throught provoking that I can't do anything else while I'm readng it and when someone else makes me try I get... very cranky.
The last line was beautiful of course. I adored Sasuke 'growth',for lack of a better word, throughout this chapter.
Oh and favorite line:
The words were meant for Naruto, but Sasuke also heard the words that Suigetsu had not spoken aloud: “We should have picked you up much earlier.” When would the grudge wear off?

It's just that you have made his team a joy to read... for the first time. Until the next.

That's the way Naruto! Will Sasuke kiss Naruto? Hurry with the next chapter!!

holey shit i love the godamned stuff you write i never knew i could read well or type good while im drunk off my ass but ill sit around and read your works all night!!!! yeah lets get wasted!!!! whahooo keep the stories up!

I think Juugo and Naruto would get along, personally...

i think it was very canon to have naruto look at juugo talk with him and then state to himself i didn't have it as bad as i thought. this shows juugo in a way that i have never thought of before. i never think of what his life what like before he was with oochimaru and this made me do so and i thank you for that (anyone who can help me think outside of the norm is always good to me). was the black cloud that was inside of juugo kuubyi's dark half or did the darkness that was inside of juugo just act like a replacement since it had the same content. i can't wait to see the next chapter.

That wait and see worries me XD. Interesting how Naruto's sorta anti-gay yet loves Sasuke..

another great chapter. i haveesome questions but i will wait to see how the next chapter plays out toa sk them. i really like this story and can't wait til the next chapter.

I'm glad Juugo and Kyuubi are both doing ok. Also happy that Naruto is staying with Sassuke and his team. He's better off with them than with Kohona. Hurry with the next chapter!!

i thought the legend was the real one (stupid me) because i remember hearing or reading it somewhere but once i got to the author's note i was like oh yeah it did not say anything about the same sexes (nice yaoi vamp on an old legend). i like how you are getting them to realize the importance of the other. sometimes in oder to get to the sexin people speed things up but i much prefer to have actual story then read pointless or useless smut (although on occasion everything is all good). what about the teams that went to help jiraiya will they be reappearing in the story again or was it when sasuke spoke to sakura. what about jiraiya are sasuke and naruto going to go and help him only to arrive to late. i can't wait to read the next chapter.