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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the baby steps they are taking, watching them grow older, more mature, more together... and the legends were brilliant.
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
KYUUBI. ZOMG *Dies* ...yes, i know. It killed people. On command though. Its a fox, I love foxes. kyuubicute. squee.
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I dunno. I think he'd miss Iruka at least a little :P.
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay... seriously... I check the 'new' stories everyday and still I missed one? How? But again... more for today I guess.
I actually have a lot to comment on, your story always gets me thinking, but now I find I'm too tired to do more than say keep up the amazing work. I look forward to the next and I loved the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. When Naruto was questioning Sasuke's position as leader... very well written.
I'm write a much better review next time... I promise.
I actually have a lot to comment on, your story always gets me thinking, but now I find I'm too tired to do more than say keep up the amazing work. I look forward to the next and I loved the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. When Naruto was questioning Sasuke's position as leader... very well written.
I'm write a much better review next time... I promise.
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chp 28 Banter was adorable XD. I really like that Suigetsu talked Kisame out of fighting btw. Ch 29 was nice in that Sasuke and Naruto have obviiusly changed...but I think they can still be friends/more. Heh. Naruto, pot calling kettle. Ch 30 - YAY JUUGO. SQUEE. CH 31 Awe, Sasuke has some decency XD. heheheh.
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the idea of everyone having a happy place to go to and that sasuke's was starting to freezeover (i thought that was true to life). thanks for answering my question about the title. i can't wait til the next update.
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Please continue!!
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay. First this line gave me shivers. Amazing insight that I have never seen put into words. Absolutely perfect:
Everyone admires him for his courage, Sasuke thought, and nobody realizes that he is just not able to see any danger.
Interesting descriptions of both of the inner 'workings'. I also liked their individual thought and attempts in comforting one another. As always an excellent update.
Everyone admires him for his courage, Sasuke thought, and nobody realizes that he is just not able to see any danger.
Interesting descriptions of both of the inner 'workings'. I also liked their individual thought and attempts in comforting one another. As always an excellent update.
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh the suspense. why did the black stuff flow to kuubyi to be eaten i do not think that is good. isn't that stuff supposed to be homicidal urges. what will that do to the kuubyi. will it weaken the seal and that's why he decided to help. how was naruto able to move around and get karin if sasuke was in his mind and the kuubyi was in juugo's. i really can't wait to see the next chapter now.
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I though some of the story I don't like. I do however like your story despite what I dont' like. Hopefully this comment makes some sense probably doesn't I don't make sense when it's 4am. I just want to see where you are going withthis story and the relationship with Naruto and Sasuke. I love how you are taking it slowly. the thing that drives me nuts is the way you end the story at it's flowing, I dislike cliff hangers of any kind ggrr! so please continue to write even if you drive me nuts with cliff hangers.