rate_review Reviews

Once again, I love you!!!!!!!! Omg, you rock. your writing style is awesome. I have read maybe two other authors as good as u. Will u marry me?

Wow! This was really well-written. I had to make myself read it all, as I'm not really used to that level of violence in my yaoi (and I really love Kankuro and Gaara and think they're good guys!). It was descriptive, well-paced, and the ending was really socko. It gave me that "Uh-oh!" feeling. It was really creepy (in a good way!). And oh yeah...it was sexy.

I wanted to thank you for reviewing my story, "Iruka Moves." I couldn't find another way to thank you, and I thought returning the favor was probably the best way anyway. So thanks!

though nothing usually affects me this scared me shitless,and kinda makes me want revenge.well dont though the feelings were right on though the impact was tough

Um...Wren I read this earlier today but I decided to review now originally I was gonna just say Whoa but now I think I will just say this

DAMN...like whoa....O.O

You know, I reviewed this on Y!Gal yesterday, but found it here today, and was very annoyed to see that it had one vote of a 1+ and no reviews. I think is someone is going to give a negative rating they should at least have the decency to give some constructive criticism as a polite gesture at the very least. I hate it when people score something poorly because it offended their sensibilities, which I am almost certain is the case in this situation. Just because it is graphic and violent and might squick you is hardly justification to rank it poorly. This was a well written piece, and I just hate to see it shot down by some vanilla reader. If they can't see 'Underneath the underneath' to enjoy the fic, that is their own damn fault!

Okay, enough with my rant; this is an incredibly emotionally charged piece that does justice to the concept of such a profound betrayal. It was also executed with technical proficiency and wasn't some poorly attempted and not well thought out stab into the violence genre. Again, I give you kudos.

DAMN!!! those brothers are really pissed off!! i wonder how kiba and naruto got caught? maybe you could write another chapter and tell us how!!

....Whoa...lol, I am still in shock! Good job in creating such vivid pictures. *sweatdrop* I am really going to have to remember to send the Suna Brothers a christmas card this year...

Holy Crap. Kankuro's a sadistic bastard.

Is that the end?

Oh wow! I'm impressed. When you stated it was dark I had no idea it was THAT dark. I read many stories like this before but NEVER on aff.net so I'm quite surprised and impressed. It's VERY good and I hope you write more I just dying to know what's going to happen next. Did Naruto and Kiba really cheat on them or was a big misunderstanding (and that's a n understatement). I can't wait for the next chapter please update very soon!