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for Down the Rabbit Hole and Back Again

by PrplGrl

schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had to stop at Chapter nine. Had to give my poor brain a break from the angst. I really get the feeling that you've been addicted before as I read this. Perhaps you haven't, but the life of a drug addict is so tremulous, and you caught that frighteningly well in this story. The ever moving pain of an addict's life is mind numbing.

Your description is absolutely incredible, not to mention the fact that you have a beautiful grasp on the characters and how they relate to each other. I'm so impressed by you. You've definitely made a fan out of me.

Beautiful work.
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! As is the Gentle Massage series. When are you going to finish this one?
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schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Just, so very amazing. Please continue.

I like the fluffyyness. NarutoxShikamaru is cuteee.
Itachi should die...
person Hen
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! You can't end it like that!

I think the "odd client" was Kakashi. Will you let us know eventually?
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHAAA..........
GAAAAAAHHHH!!
YOU ARE SO WONDERFULLY EVIL WITH THE CLIFFIE!!!!!
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I... hate... cliffhangers. *headdesk*
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable and well-written! Hey, what gas station can I find those pills at? I think they might be fun to take in the right circumstances (tho not for poor Naruto!). Hee hee. Neat, keep it coming!
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^^ The 'Odd Client' is Jiraiya, isn't it? And they had sex too! Wow!

Awesomeness, awesomeness, awesomeness! I can't wait for more!
person Hen
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No flames. That was great. Really hot!
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Jiraiya to the rescue, and a very sexy Jiraiya he is, too. I needed a break from the angst. Shikamaru needed some kindness. I hope Naruto will forgive Shikamaru (even though it really wasn't his fault) and that Sasuke gets a rabid weasel dropped down his pants. :)