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for Down the Rabbit Hole and Back Again

by PrplGrl

person cynaga
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"The Door of Need" - an exquisite chapter. Love the use of the actual door as an analogy and the rhythmn of Shika's descent. Fantastic writing - smooth and gripping.
person cynaga
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow just wow
person Tsunao
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now this is certainly one of the most dirtiest one of Shikamaru and I like it. And you know what, when I read about his father finding him in that place, all I can think is, what will he feel, finding his son like this and I could not wait for him to see them. Now Shikamaru is on a new path and I wonder how this one will go.
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-reads reads reads-

...!

-looks around frantically-

...Aw! The pretty words stopped!! T-T
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O Wow! This sounds like its going to be great! I'm totally going to look out for the next chapter!

Great job, hun!
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm such an addict to Shika stories....I loved this. :3 Very nice. I like Shika angst lots, and you wrote this very well. :3!!! It wasn't random, and yet it was....I dunno, it just seemed like it was random, yet it could happen? Meh. This is meant to be a positive review in any case, so enjoy my praise!

luney
person sinheart
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please most another chapter!!! i can't wait for what happens next. you have me hooked.
person sinheart
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please most another chapter!!! i can't wait for what happens next. you have me hooked.
person sinheart
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please most another chapter!!! i can't wait for what happens next. you have me hooked.
person SIndoa
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! (^_^)