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for Sacrifices

by ladywolfTerri

person Meikyuu
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing sooooo much. I'm hooked on this story already! Lovin' the hickeys... worried about what happens when Naruto gets a clue though. x__@;; Thanks so much for sharing ::love all over you::
person sethian
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice Start!! I love it! Naruto's wit is quite funny! I hope you've got more to come!
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heehee so the villagers thought it was 'abdominal'? that gave me a chuckle :) anyway not to be a bitch but i figure u meant 'abominable' moving on...

Naruto's ... do i want to move it from denseness to retardedness now? LOL whatever it is, it slays me! "you seem all there to me." *looks at naruto in shock* poor poor little boy lol There were a couple other naruto moments that had me laughing but the lemon :D washed them out my mind haha
person lonelylulaby
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome, and I feel bad for that inocent person that was killed just because Naruto wasn't at the sacrificial table. Loved the smexy scene and I wonder when Naruto will finally know the truth about Sasuke. I really liked the 1st chapter when Naruto was scared of a bear instead of the monster.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
person charmpit
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ladywolfTerri has done it again! This is a wonderful beginning and I can't wait to see where it leads. Innocent Naruto and a horny Sasuke-vampire. I love it!
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa! just read both chapters and I have to say they rock! That was so hot! I love Naruto so cute and Sasuke is so dark. I love it I can't wait for more. Please update soon.
=)
person shadowphoenix143
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The banter between Naruto and Sasuke was so fun to read and I love Naruto's complete ignorance! Really great chapter!
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Way cool and a bit creepy as well! I really hope you continue this!
person shadowphoenix143
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great too! The sex scene was totally hot! I can't wait to read more, I will defiantly be looking forward to any future updates!
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG i loooooove it. love love LOVE IT! naruto is sooo dense tho lol 'dont leave what if the monster comes?!' haha oh naru honey so adorable. Can't wait for the next installment of this :D