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I hope you will continue to rewrite this-I have always felt that the Saki-chan universe deserved a fully thought out story, something to tie together the edges and give voice to the story thats just been waiting for someone to write it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

As far as constructive criticism I don't have much. A few transitions are a bit rough, but for the most part, I love your writing style, and its very good. Keep up the awesome work :D

It's nice.. amazing that the three split like that, but i've liked the saki-chan universe stories i've read and this rates up there too. i like little sasuke-chan, he's the cute innocent that you know is hiding, deep inside sasuke's mind.
though poor naruto for getting split up from his time with saki... lol. i'll keeping an eye out for more.

Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

I laughed hard when Sasuke(Avenger) came busting in with a hard-on and saying that both he and the younger one can feel it! XD, but then, I got all sad because this story is OD making me sad....that probably made no sense, but anywhoooo! I really am drawed into this story because it makes a fantastic sequal to Lace and Strawberries! I love it so much! Really, Sasuke is such a bastard! XD, and aww Sasuke-chan is like the most sane one out of the three Sasuke's! Wow, so no sex...unless you're planing on making a threesome! Lol, please update when you can and sorry about that computer problem you had...believe me...my laptop was gone for five years just to be fixed...that's how fucked up my system was....my poor baby *caresses laptop*...but, now I am having a new one, I broke up with the other, XD. Please, I'm rambling, just do the world of yaoi lovers a favor and update when possible!

Blahs,
Pepsi

you have have have to update this soon! i don't know how i missed this before, but all the fics based off "lace and strawberries" are my absolute favorite ever in the entire naruto fandom. and this is really well written with a very interesting idea behind it. i'm really looking forward to the next update of this and i hope you write more stories involving saki. they really really are my favorite. and sasuke-chan is absolutely adorable. i look forward to seeing more of him in the fic too. update soon please! :)

Heh heh, this is a brilliant fic - I have never read anything even remote to it - So cool. Plz update soon XD

yayyy! haha, i happend to find you on here by chance xD
and there's one more chapter on here than there is on y!gallery :D weee


it really is a great story so far.
the suspence of not know what's going to happen next is great.
you capture the audience wonderfully dear.
keep it up ^-^

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

I think you're off to a great start. Please continue.

wait was susuke the ones that would wear the skirt?