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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have really caught my interest with this story. Please write more when you get a chance
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes you are the coolest. I really liked this chapter, it was kinda sad about Arashi hatting his son, but what can you do? It sorda reminds me of 'Skip Beat.' Anywho I can't wait till you update again. I wanna know who he found in high school that was worthy of all those things, also when you started to talk about Naruto changing his age, what age did he become? I'm sorry I'm a little slow with things like this.
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh, i LIKE this fic with all the little twists and political details. very nice ... keep up the good work!
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the snake freak is after naruto
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very cool start. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
youve already caught my interest now im only hopping to find out who hes found that has piqued his interest.poor gai his death was for a noble cause,hope you update soon
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really looking forward to reading more of this story, you've started it out great! Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon please!^_^
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* You are that~ cool!
But oh my god, I almost started crying reading that one paragraph dedicated soully to explaining how everyone died...the way Tenten died is defiantly a way I can see it going down but damn woman! I know all the characters were minor and not really a paragraph to pay attention to but still *sniffles*
This story is so awesome!! I can't wait for the update! >< Oro bastard and his lies!
But oh my god, I almost started crying reading that one paragraph dedicated soully to explaining how everyone died...the way Tenten died is defiantly a way I can see it going down but damn woman! I know all the characters were minor and not really a paragraph to pay attention to but still *sniffles*
This story is so awesome!! I can't wait for the update! >< Oro bastard and his lies!
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
next ch naru/sasu? please
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was really good. I didn't expect it to be Orochimaru who was the Assassin King.
It was sad that Arashi couldn't care for his son. I mean it wasn't his fault that his mother chose him over her own life. But I understand the grief he was facing. It wasn't very clear at the point that he was made 4th Assassin King if he had started to have some sort of relationship with Naruto or if he still just tolerated him by letting everyone else raise him. It felt like he did care for him or at least at some point he started to feel for his son otherwise he wouldn't have Naruto take his spot in the 12 elite.
It was sad that Naruto really had no emotion for his father when he was kiiled but then again, as stated already, he never had a relationship with his father (or aleast it wasn't clear whether he did or not).
Will Naruto meet someone to fall in love with and will that be Sasuke? I hope it will be, since you did not state what the pairing(s) will be.
Great first chapter. I look forward to your next update.
It was sad that Arashi couldn't care for his son. I mean it wasn't his fault that his mother chose him over her own life. But I understand the grief he was facing. It wasn't very clear at the point that he was made 4th Assassin King if he had started to have some sort of relationship with Naruto or if he still just tolerated him by letting everyone else raise him. It felt like he did care for him or at least at some point he started to feel for his son otherwise he wouldn't have Naruto take his spot in the 12 elite.
It was sad that Naruto really had no emotion for his father when he was kiiled but then again, as stated already, he never had a relationship with his father (or aleast it wasn't clear whether he did or not).
Will Naruto meet someone to fall in love with and will that be Sasuke? I hope it will be, since you did not state what the pairing(s) will be.
Great first chapter. I look forward to your next update.