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for The Dance

by SumiHatake

schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the lemon! Good job. I'll definatly read more later! Great story!
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!
person EternalEmbrace
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, too lazy to sign in, too lazy. Finally finished reading this! *is proud of self* Awesome story, and A+ on the smut :D you are what I someday hope to be. Turns out, I'd read more of this than I thought before.... aaaanyway, I actually think its good you're leaving this where you did. Its a good complete ending, and adding on may actually make it lose some of its charm.
person Anise
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was (as always) seriously hot, I think all stories should end with a chapter of smut and the ending with Kakashi and his grandmother was cute! Another great story, I look forward to your next one ^_^
person RyuEarth
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! i'm glad that this story is over and this chapter was so yummy! good luck on completeing your other stories, and extra luck on finding tobi/dei fics! =D
person Anise
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(7) I loved the idea of you giving Kakashi a grandmother, they tend to know about your entire life (with usually embarrassing stories) and at the same time have absolutely no trouble lending a hand if they think it will help you in some way, she's perfect! :)
The conversation between the two guys was perfectly awkward with of course the usual misunderstandings but I was glad they finally worked things out because I don't know if I could handle much more of them pouting and moping about. Of course this means next chapter-makeup smex, at least in my little fangirl world that's what's going to happen, I can't wait for an update ^_^
person jazzy
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
make me cry! so touching! I love this story so much! :D
person RyuEarth
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so cute!!!!! love the this chapter! =)
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more! more!
it's really good story :)
person cally
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mew? im liking this....more please?!