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for The Dance

by SumiHatake

person leanne
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay yay! A new chapter! dancingin her seat, wiggle wiggle of joy! :D Love this story so much! look forward to future chapters. Wish AFF had some sort of chapter-alert function so I know when my favorite stories have updated. :D Keep up the good work! :D
person Anise
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(5) Iruka really doesn't have a clue does he, which is always worse when someone's mad at you because your left just feeling lost. I'm hoping this next chapter helps with a little insight for Iruka, then he can figure out how he's going to make it up to poor pouting Kakashi. I look forward to the upcoming conversation and finding out who this person at the bookstore is to Kakashi :)
person naracest
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaawww. It is nice to have a story where Iruka is the one to mess it up. I hope you finish this one! it's really good! And there was promise of a happy ending!!!!
person jazzy
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! Poor Iruka! Mizuki really messed him up. I hope you will be updating soon. I look forward to the next installment of chapters. :D
person luxeflex
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
one of the best kakairu fics I've readi n a while! My former obsession with this pairing has now come back xD
wonderfully in character. Can't wait for the next chapter
person Anise
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You updated! *snugsu* I was so happy to see a new chapter I've been wanting to see what happens next between these two :)
This really isn't going to be easy for them is it, part of me thinks that Iruka should talk to Kakashi but judging by how their last conversation went that just might make things worse. I loved the little interaction with izu/ko/anko that makes me want to know just what it is they get up to on the weekends ;) Hopefully real life allows you some time to sit down and write because I can't wait for the next update!
person littleolmee
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back to the land of writing. Nice chapter, man Kakashi is mad huh? Can't blame him. Iruka is really struggling to keep some resemblance of friendship with him. Was great to read the story again. Hope you can fit time in to write with as much work as you do. Take care.

littleolmee
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so good, poor Iruka and Kakashi, can't wait for next chapter
person Anise
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(3) I'm so happy you updated but this really wasn't a fun chapter was it, you certainly had an interesting take on Mizuki and Iruka's relationship. Mizuki's always portrayed as just outright evil but I like how you at least attempted to give him some redeeming qualities, he couldn't always have been all bad if Iruka liked him at one time. Poor Kakashi and Iruka though they're already screwing up and they've barely begun, can't wait to read what's coming! :)
person littleolmee
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally here. Well this is an interesting start. You described the dancing in a very hot way. Hee, hee their protecting one another from girls. I wonder what Tsunade wanted? Off to read ch 2.

littleolmee