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for A Dream for a Dream

by vanessaclarke

schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that is quite a way to end the fic ... sad ending but kind of nice, or at least a nice change
very lovely fic ^__^
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha little freaks ... meh i can live with it
Haha Neji questioning the great fox, that would be funny to see
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
boo to sasuke! I really don't see the overall love for that character ... maybe it is his emoish ways

I agree that there isn't enough KyuuNaru love out there, and your story is just want we need ^__^
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow ... just one simple thing destoryed Naruto's future ... can't wait to find out more^__^
person a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h.
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. That was an awesome story! I really wish you'd make a sequel! It was sad then happy, confused then enlightened for the characters and I liked the emotion they had.

It was interesting how you flipped back and forth from Sasuke and Naruto's points of view. Please do continue this. You could have Hinode growing up, Kyuu-kun and Naru-chan's new life, maybe even more kits thrown in!

It has so much potential and I'm not just saying that because it has my favorite pairing! Please do consider it! ^_^
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah good story, and at least the uchiha legacy can live on.
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the new chappie and the cliffhanger keep it up!
person neko-chan
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey thank for the up date hope you up date soon is a very good story and i hope that you stay with it
person TheSimi
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for this chapter! I loved to hear a bit about how Naru has been doing and of course Hinode sound just about the cutest thing ever! I really don't like Itachi at the moment and I can't wait to find out what will happen next...
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was my first time reading this story and I must say, it is really good! I was actually surprised when Naruto got together with the Kyuubi - assuming that, like in all other stories, he'd somehow end up with Sasuke. Its refreshing to see that he hadn't. I'm also glad Kyuubi is such a good mate, ^^ Actually, there is a lot about this story that I really truly enjoy.

I know you expressed some worry a few chapters back that you thought people probably just read this to pass the time, but after reading it myself, I doubt it. This story isn't just some mindless smutfest that is so common around here. Its the kind of story where you actually have to be emotionally invested to read. There's a lot going on and an actual plot and everything. This is a genuinely good story and I really really enjoyed it. Hopefully the next update will come soon, but even if it doesn't, I'll keep an eye out for the next update. Keep up the great work!