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for A Dream for a Dream

by vanessaclarke

person Lanie12777
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say your story gets better with every chapter, can't wait for the next update!^_^
person nyge98
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Those two chapters were great. They provided some great understanding of the situation Naruto is now in. I can't wait till the next chapter.
person ringpop
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Since I have no other way of communication with you....i have to review you....again : )

Ohhhhh M'gooooshhh! I'm so excited! Kage told me the things to look for in a potential beta! & you totally pass!

HAH! Already found a beta?! No way...haha even if I did lmao I'd drop them like a hot plate to have you! Like I'd let you slip by! YOU'RE STUCK WITH ME FOREVER NOW! Of course I'd love to have you as my beta! Are you kidding me?! I was hoping Allys strolled thru, hahah but it was just wishful thinking. You're just as good. Ohhh!! I'm so excited to have such a humorously witty person as my beta!(sounds totally foreign) & organized too!! YEE!

I'm soooo happy I'm like on cloud 99!! haha

I'm gonna let you know this is going to be a task. I'm really picky. So I'm giving you another chance to back out : ) But! If you deside to stay, we can talk out the details in an e-mail

Hit me up!

ring_pahp@hotmail.com
person Meg
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More...more...more!!!! Heh heh,you're doing an excellent job with this tale, I'm looking forward to the next chapter... hope it's really long! ^_^
person animelover
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! that was just ... OMG! ok, now that i've calmed down a bit. that was just awesome, adn taht fight scene was unbelievably detailed. YEA BABY!! whew, i'm exhausted just reading it. i'm a little lost though, what kind of demon attacked kyuu? was it a snake demon or another fox demon? i can't wait to see konoha's reaction to this, and i hope sasu gets his just desserts, like a swift hard kick in the pants and losing naru 4-ever!

luv ya!
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an excellent look into Naruto's thoughts! I love how the team 'has his back'. Brilliantly written. Looking forward to the next.
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kyuubi and Naru?? Love it!!! :D Poor Naru. He must be so confused and Sasuke's behaviour didn't help much at all. I like your idea of Ino being able to record her memories to play back for the others. Love this plot and can't wait to see how you are going to take it :D Gambatte yo!
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can totally understand Sasuke's frustration... this slow taking off of the information 'bandaid', however brilliant plot wise, is simply making me want to scream. Where is Naruto! Is he okay! And Kyuubi all getting 'jiggy' with it... I'm not sure how I feel about that. ;)
Awesome chapter!
person Damp
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.M.G.

-Damp *dies*
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I couldn't stop reading until it hit the end and I was like - NOOO..want more! That fight was pretty good. I understand the reluctance to write fight scenes. They're not easy to do at all. Great job though! Update soon, can't wait to see what happens next.