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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I love where this is going. I can't wait to read more.
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just wanted to say I love your story(it's becoming one of my absolute favorites, because of the way you portray Naruto), can't wait for the next chapter!^_^
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, that was awesome! i'm guessing naru's condition that you're describing is him going into heat? you did a good job of "showing" and not "telling" us what he was going through and how he felt. i'll be really curious to see what you do with kyuubi. will naru go back to the village and face sasuke? is he goign to defect with kyuubi?
looking forward to the next installment .. see ya!
looking forward to the next installment .. see ya!
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was a lot of information to take in. I cannot wait for Sasuke's reaction.
I adore your portrayal of Naruto by the way. I like an intelligent and yet uncynical Naruto. He didn't know something and he went out of found an answer.
Stupid Sasuke. Making Naruto feel insecure and like he is losing his best friend.
Until the next...
I adore your portrayal of Naruto by the way. I like an intelligent and yet uncynical Naruto. He didn't know something and he went out of found an answer.
Stupid Sasuke. Making Naruto feel insecure and like he is losing his best friend.
Until the next...
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going! You've pinned both Sasuke and Naruto down in my opinion, and I can't wait to see what happens next! Poor Naruto! Not only having to go through the trouble of being the Kyuubi vessel, but he loses his best friend and has to go through some unnatural (supernatural? XD) changes.
Keep up the good work and keep those chappies coming! ^_^
Keep up the good work and keep those chappies coming! ^_^
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Quite interesting relly, please update soon
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way this started....I can't wait to read more.
Definitely other pov's would be great!
Definitely other pov's would be great!
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I still have no idea how long you plan on making this. But as long as it's to your satifaction. . .. . . . . .
-Damp *sweatdrops*
-Damp *sweatdrops*
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
noooo! reactions!! i wanna know their reactions!! that would be cool to read some of naru's pov but i like the way you've got it so far as well. anyway, looking foward to the next update.
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chappie! i was a little disappointed that no one kicked sasu's butt, however i suppose he really does feel bad about it enough. what's the council going to think now? will sasu go after naru? oh so many questions and so few chapters left. LOL!