rate_review Reviews

(I review as I read.)
Interesting beginning. . . . I like how you snuck in the first-person. . . . Okay, I’m a little confused as to who’s narrating. But it’s still really good. Kinda eerie (but that’s what you were going for ^_~). . . . Oh, okay, the POV is switching. Cool. . . . Some of this jumping around is confusing me. When/Where/Who??? ?_?'
Interesting how you put the lyrics as dialogue.
Very poetic. . . . Huh? Are they having sex after all? How did it jump to that? I didn’t see it! õ_õ
Okay, I like it, I like it.

Interesting! I’ve never read one like that! I was a little confused, but it was kind of a good confusion. You might have achieved the goal you set in the A/N!

I really loved this story! You had me guessing the whole time as to who was the photographer and who was the muse. I think you definitely had the whole 'stalker' theme going very well, which was your intention I believe based on the song choice. I like how you worked the lyrics into the 'dialogue' of the story. I found this oneshot was really creatively written, and I truly enjoyed it! Awesome! :)

that was very good it reminds me of something i would write. it was very poetic. I enjoyed reading it.

awesome. you definitely got the sensual-creepy thing going on. lovely lovely oneshot.

What just happened??

-lostANDconfused

I loved the way it read like poetry... or it sounded like poetry in my head... is was subtly erotic... not many people write eroticism well on this site... it's mostly just smut...but you write erotically very well. I loved it!

very unique story.
=)

That was a pretty good AU. Now I totally want to hear that song!

I actually kinda liked it. It is rather inspiring and I am now drawn to my sketch book. Keep on doing what you are doing, I love the symbolism, and gently drawn images you invoke.

Dace