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for The Demilitarized Zone

by lexjamandme

person lara5170
schedule September 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, it being the 1st story of yours that wasn't a 1 shot. Thank you for writing & posting. There were so many parts that had me laughing and at 1 point I almost had coffee coming out my nose, I can't even recall the last time something like that happened.
person Mocca
schedule November 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome . Not too long story, buuuut with good plot. very refreshing , i'm very captived by your story . thanks for the good story. Altough there are some wrong words. But that's okay . Still amazing for me.
person Asira
schedule July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lay me on my back…” Naruto moaned. “That way I have a better chance of drowning when I throw up.”

Omg my favorite line of any story I've seen! Awesome job....love the humor in this fic.
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Delightful. Itachi is a maniacal boss in this one!
person kourtney
schedule April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ok i just have to say rereading this for the billionth time I'm cracking up. that being said i recently have been reading 50 shades of grey and i noticed when i was that the two mains send emails back and forth in a style very similar to yours. this made me giggle for the longest time and made me come back to your lovely stories.
person DrivvenWrinth
schedule October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I had forgotten just how fantastic this story was. I love your Itachi and the emails are genius. Glad I came back to read it. :D
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!! The whole bit of frustrating, lovestruck, aggressive, lemonless wonder!!! I was on the edge of my chair for the most part of the story, and I loved the story, the way Itachi and the lovebirds were created. I got so into the story, a stayed up at night just to read till the end... of a chapter... - damn, it was long, but I'm happy with it, 'cause it was just great!
I was laughing really hard at some situations (like in the end, before Sasuke and Naruto got to sleep together) and hurray for killing Orochimaru!

So I just wanted to say, I'm all for sequel too!!! Thanks!!!
person alex
schedule September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love how you incorporated the whole "my body just moved" scene into your story... your are AMAZING!!!!!! and in an au no less... nice, very nice :)
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you are one of my all-time favourite naruto-fandom authors.
just wanted to say thank you for sharing your stories with us;
you are an amazing and extremely talented author.
always really enjoy reading this story -- it's definitely my favourite :-)
<3
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!16 chapters full of win! I LOVED it, seriously. I love the bitter rivalry between them, then the lost and how they made it through the trajedy.