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by lexjamandme

schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. I laughed at all the internal emails... they were all brilliant! I've like to see the epilogue! Congrats on finishing the story... you need to write us a new one!!
person charmpit
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding? Of course I'd read an epilogue!

YOU ARE A GODDESS. I loved this story and am sad to see it end. Of course, I always feel that way at the end of your stories, you have a way of taking us all with your characters to that other place. You are gifted, there is no question about that.

Thank you for writing this story and sharing it with all of us.
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL Of course I would read an epilogue to this! It was lovely, my dear.
person Raholea
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*collapses*
yummy, and in this case, the sap was kinda needed. at least it was balanced by orochimaru's death. nice way to go, thank you.
and yay! if the epilogue includes or is set right after the wedding, then yes, i'll read!!! (wedding night, maybe? just a touch of sap and lots of smexiness????? please!????????????!!!!!! )
person digiditz
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That has got to do the stupidest question ever. Of course I'd read it. In fact if you didn't write it I would be highly offended. And that is my not so humble opinion on the subject.
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I for one would definitely read ANYTHING you wrote but I would love it if you added more Naoki, Sasuke and Naruto interaction. That little boy is so cute with all his Uchiha-ness and his instant love for the blond. So cute. And its too funny how Sasuke seems to actually be bothered by the boy lol. Loved the story by the way. You have me on pins and needles with the other story I am just too lazy to type the title. JA!!
person Lechan
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit, you always end your fics so perfectly. Honestly this doesn't need an epilogue. The ending is just so perfect as it is, and you ended it the way I was hoping, kinda like a full circle thing and it was great. I hoping for the desk scene to come back that was sexy, but also, if you wrote it and posted it I would read the epilogue because its another bit to the story and I would have to be crazy not to read it and love it. The main story is done and it is as perfect as everything ele you have written, but a little side story is ALWAYS welcome and loved. ^-^ The characters for this story deserve all you can give them and I will wait for an eternity for that epilogue if need be. If you want to just post it as a one shot that woks too. As I have already said, the story doesn't need it but I will certainly read it anyway. ^-^
person Word_Slave
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hellllllooooooo.............
Read an epilogue??? I turn the damn computer on everyday looking for an update!!!!!! What the hell are you thinking!!! Plus I think that you could continue this with Itachi... and maybe... genma???? um, just a thought, or Kotetsu or..... well shit, now I'm writing your story in my head. BAD bad slave!!! Lol
I looooovvvve this story, especially the way they made certain Orochi was um.... well.... veeerrrry dead.

Thanks soooo much. lots of love
Slave
I'll probably review on Y! too.
person llyoung
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Would love to read an epilogue.
person blueh
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would read it!