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for The Demilitarized Zone

by lexjamandme

person qwerty
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of course I'll read the epilogue! I can't wait to see them in a couple of years.
That was such a touching moment with Itachi reflecting on his family, especially his wife.
I love the text messages interspersed in the chapter!! They're so funny!
update!!
person gwyllion
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH NO!!! It's over!!! *flails crazily* O__O

Well...before the epilogue that is......XD I seriously can't believe it! I wish it's never ending tho. This fic is def high in my A-list and will be saved into my hd to be read and re-read over again and again. That's ho much I enjoyed it. This new chappie def made my whole teeth ache from the sugary sappiness and cuteness. I'm so happy to see Oro being dragged away. The text messaging between 'Minion' and the 'Devil' is forever amusing me. I just can't get enough of this. Once my deadlines from work is over, there will def be serious fanart. Thank you so much for this gift. Please keep up the wonderful work. Will def wait patiently for more. <333
person drivven
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of my favorite stories and I'm not even a huge sasunaru fan. You truly made something new and special. You're on my 'genius' list hon. Congrats on a wonderful, absolutely entertaining story. And btw, the answer is yes. A resounding yes!
person Danni
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! YES TO AN EPILOGUE!!!!! I loved the part when itachi was with his kids!!!! OMG!!! I've been wait so long for this chapter!!! Thank you for posting!!!! *tears* i don't want it to end!!!
person Damp
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha!!! Almost towards the end...oh wait...I DON'T WANT IT TO END!!!

-Damp *goes to her corner and cries*
person animelover
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i cannot believe i have found yet ANOTHER EPIC FIC ON THIS SITE!!!!! holy moly on a stick woman ... you can really shake it down! humor, drama, sigh ... i know i'm repeating myself but DANG!!!! those texts or e-mails were absolutely hilarious; if possible, they were funnier than the beginning ones. orochimaru's demise was perfect (why doesn't someone do that to sakura once in a while? oops, sorry about that!) and the itachi fluff actually brought a tear to my eye.

i usually beg for an epilogue, but in this case, i say nah! i mean, if the majority goes for it, you write it, i'll read it. but you ended it so perfectly *sniff sniff*. i love your fics. you just rock .. PERIOD!!! i still want a paperback, autographed copy of this story in my secret po box. LOL!!!

keep up the good work! U RULE!
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And, doggone it, YES! I'm ALL FOR AN EPILOGUE! PLEASE UPLOAD IT! I BEG U!! ;o;
person nyge98
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so beautiful. I will cry when this story ends.
person blueh
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is just beyond.... AMAZING! not forgetting, HOT too!!! I love the way you piece the characters. Especially Itachi - the Devil, Lucifer, Lou!, Sasuke and Naruto - the minions (LOL), and lastly... the duckies! Seriously... genius. I adore your other stories too! I have yet to start on All the Small Things just cuz I can't find enough time to even rest, not to mention to read. I can't wait for the last chapter and epilogue.
person poke_the_kitty@hotmail.com
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*has a seizure and dies*

Oh Em GEE!! That was so good, I think I might have drooled on my keyboard a little. XD

Keep going sooo good. *shakes fist*