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by lexjamandme

person Lechan
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Again you leave me speechless. I knew Naruto had to be saed but still I was on the edge of my seat in antisipation. I Really do love the Uchiha Mafia that's going on, Kisame rocks my socks and NAruto's impromptue singing was to die for. I was waiting for "The song that has no end" and "I know a Song that gets on everybodies Nerves" ^-^ I was amazed and I really love how you depict Naruto. I hope this gets updated soon, even knowing that it was just updated I can't wait for more. Selfish? Perhaps but damn you have made me an addict. Woot, I can't wait for the family reunion and for the Smut that sould come around soon, not to mention the fact that duckies still have to see them and then Sasuke and NAruto seriously have to get married... OOH I cna't wait. Also, I adore the way you wrote Itachi in this one. I must say I am most impressed with him and his character. His chilren are well written and for being OC's they make me smile and again I am in Awe. Once more, love your story endlessly, and hopefullly I'll see an update soon.
person Damp
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is Orichimaru going to get killed? Because I think he deserves to be tortured and then killed slowly and painfully. -.-

-Damp *Yes, killed slowly and painfully.*
person Anassa Thalassa
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:) you updated! Love the story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa very thrilling chapter. Yeah Kabuto's dead and that snake ass is hurt. I hope they don't take he to the same hospital as Naruto and Sasuke. I loved this chapter. I can't wait to read more.
=)
person Sancta
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:Worships:
person qwerty
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They're safe!!!! That was intense. Great chapter!!
update!
person Jelp
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Sasuke to the rescue! ^_^ I'm so glad that Orochimaru didn't have time to do anything to Naruto. That would have scarred him a bit much. Now Sasuke and Naruto really do need to consumate things in the next chapter...right? Right? PLEASE?!?!?!? I'm sure I'm not the only one begging for some smut in the next chapter.

Even if there's no smut, this story is so great that it definietly makes up for it. :-) ~ Jelp
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter! I loved hte fight scene. I'm so glad Naruto and Sasuke are reunited :)

Please update soon!
person Imagy
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO
THE EMOTIONAL TERMIOL!
it's been cut off!
how ever shall we survive?!?!
I looking forawrd to seeing how everyone will react!
will they finally admit that they're in love with each other?
will a confession even be nessecary?
what happens next?!?
I can't wait to find out!
'til then, lovely ^0^
person Raholea
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cries* poor poor naruto. but at least he's relatively safe now, with the Uchihas, and can be loved and coddled back to health. i hope you have a really happy ending planned for this!!!!!