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by lexjamandme

schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ack. you evil, evil person you. leaving it there...ack.

really good chapter though. i loved all the interactions. kakashi/iruka/fugaku, sasuke/kisame/itachi, etc....
person despairs
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Naruto wasnt raped, Sasuke wasnt raped...Itachi was making grown men wanna cower n cry...Chrissy is a very happy girl! :D
I love the way Sasuke went right to Naruto after the snake bastard was shot. And I love the way Itachi already refers to
Naruto as his bro-in-law. lol it was cool seeing Mr. Uchiha lose his composure ever so slightly and showed his human side, even
if it did kinda freak Kakashi and Iruka out a bit :P Ugh but the only thing is Orochimaru isnt dead..they shouldve shot him in
head...or the groin area at least...if he didnt have that particular part of his anatomy anymore maybe he would threaten less people.
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay Sasuke has rescued Naruto, now it's time for his "reward!" ???
person Kimra
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. I like when people stop bad things from happening. :D
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh man! wow! normally i don't review on aff but i frickin LOVE this story. itachi being the "devil", naruto and sasuke "minons", GARRA and the others " Duckies" its just too damn funny!!!!! i mean so many time since i strted to read this i've been rolling around laughing so hard i cry. i think my favorite line is when in chapter 11 sasuke says to itachi " Put on you Evil Lord of Darkness panties" or something like that. i laughed so hard when i read that that i woke my mom up. please update soon

person charmpit
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
person gaara89
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More!! I need more!!!!!!
person Jiro
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice action sequence! Wow, think what would have happened if Sasuke had waited an extra 15 minutes *shudders* Hooray for happy endings!

P.S. I *loved* Itachi's warning: "Be careful, little brother, that when this is over that you are still a man Naruto can love.” I swooned at that. BRILLIANT! Can I be your groupie?
person Vox
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squeals!* I'm in love. With the story, with your characters, with you.. Are you available? ^^

It was great. I'm loving what's coming - otherwise known as, "We FINALLY get lemon!". Thank you and love you.

Oh yea, if you get the time, post this over on y!Gallery. Plenty of people would love to read this. There's a link to mine in my profile, so you can drop me a line.

Love!
person Gwyllion
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH SWEET HEAVENLY LORD! This was such a fantastic read that I'm literally incoherent! O__O I practically cried and laughed in every chapter (not in that order) in reading this. The way you wrote Kakashi and Iruka as Naruto's adoptive fathers were my MOST FAVORITE parts. Especially on Kakashi's undying commitment, love, pain and suffering for his Sunshine. Absolutely BEAUTIFUL! It's so long since I've read a long and amazing fics such as yours. Would you so happen to be in Yaoi!Gallery? I swear, you have fans flocked over there and I just want to pass that message along. Once again, thank you for sharing this wonderful fic. I love it so very much. Please do keep up the awesome work! Will wait patiently for more future posts. ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! <3333 :D