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Ok I know you finished the story already!but...I just finished chapter 6 and I have to say I love how you made Itachi really really really! He reminds me of House...duckies!!!!! My pregnat sister has been in the hospital since yesterday with an infection and I can't get to her...she told me to read it would make me happy and you did thank u!

hillarious... welll written... who would a thought Oro would be after Naruto, what a twist.
Dammit, why is this a fan fic that can't be published... *bookmarks this story cause i can't fave it.

You know you blew us all away with this story--the buildup, the resolution, everything. If there is one thing you do well, it's plot out a story. You are just as good at writing what you've written, at making the story come alive.

I'm not a Sasuke x Naruto fan. It has nothing to do with anything other than the fact that I don't like Sasuke and never did. However, I love Naruto, and I love fanfiction. Between those two, I will read Sasuke x Naruto fanfiction all day long. Good fanfiction is good fanfiction.

You have provided me with countless hours of that to read. You've made my participation in the fandom so much more enjoyable than it would have been had I not come across your phenomenal body of work. I thank you for each and every moment.

You've got a great future as an author if you're going that way. I wish you the very, very best.

im really glad i read that and ill be looking into some of your other works thank you

Just finished reading this (AGAIN). I find myself always coming back to re-read your stories and I always feel terrible that I don't review enough, but I'm not good at explaining what I think about stuff and english is a hard language. >.>
You write truly beautifully. Both your way of writing, how you write the characters and how you bring forth the plot. And all those things you manage to come back to making the whole story go in those amazing circles in circles. Like how you mention Itachi's wedding ring in the very beginning of the story but then we doesn't get to know anything more until several chapters later. And how Sasuke's mantra makes such a big difference to the feeling of the whole story. *smile*
I'm somehow amazed that I get the chance of reading your stories and at the same time I'm so damn jealous because I wish I could do what you do.
You write Sasuke and Naruto so nicely together. The way they rub each other. And I adore you for being able to write Naruto bottom without making him less equal to Sasuke. Overall you just have a way with the Naruto-characters that makes them amazing personalities and very enjoyable.

I could quote so much from this story because there are just too many things I like but I'll settle for just one this time:
Sasuke looked at his mother and blanched, her black eyes had narrowed and turned cold. Suddenly, before he could stop it, his mouth opened, “He hit me first!” To his undying horror he had even pointed his finger childishly at the dobe.
This made me laugh that I lost my breath and actually felt tears in my eyes. Just thought you wanted to know. *grin*

And is it just me or is there something between Sakura and Kiba in this story? *snicker* Probably just my imagination and I just find it fascinating because I never see them together but in this story I just felt a spark there, that something could come up between them. *laugh*

And; one thing I don't get... Wasn't Sasuke's apartment blown up? *confused* So how could Naruto and Sasuke end up there later? What did I miss?

Oh there's so much I could say but I'll stop my ramblings in a foreign language here. ^^ And I'll re-read you other stories soonish and will keep watch over your profile in case of something new as usual.
You're one of the best SasuNaru-writers out there and I always enjoy your work very much, even if I'm bad at expressing it. Thank you for writing and sharing those stories.

//your stalker ;D

To: The Asshole
From: Sasuke Uchiha
Subject: You Sadistic Fucker

Itachi,

Fuck you.

Sasuke Uchiha
Vice President, Uchiha Incorporated

LOL!!!!! Enough said still laughing

Hello, me again. Re-reading your story agian.

“Now, little brother, this is exactly what I was referring to when I asked if there was anything ‘more’ you would like to share.”
Brilliant line. Gets me everytime I read this story.

This story is amazing! I can't remember the last time that I enjoyed a story so much and laughed so much during a story as this one. This truly is something else :)
I love the way you portrayed the characters. I also love the petnames they have for each other that express the closeness between them (Itachi being The Devil, Lord of Darkness and Naruto being Sunshine, Naruto and Sasuke being Minions and their teams being Children or Duckies). I love your writing style, it's smooth and seems effortless, and the text messages and e-mails were hilarious!
I like the plotline, the way it moved. And I'm glad that you pushed the sex into the last chapters - nothing kills a good story faster than reading the first chapter and stumbling across a lemon even before the characters truly know each other. In your story, everything was exactly were it was supposed to be. Nothing was rushed and it moved on it's own pace. Yay for proper build up! And the emotions you managed to get into the chapters... it all blew me away :)
I just love, love, LOVE this story!
So now I'm gonna go and read your other stories ^-^

Oh. My. Gods. I don't think I have ever loved a fanfiction more! From the very first chapter, I was cracking up and I couldn't stop. I loved the little flashbacks and I especially loved the e-mails!!! It was a sad story but it was still one of the best I have ever read and so well written! I can't wait to read more by you! >.<

I know what you mean about Naruto.
That's why I stopped watching a long time ago.
I think they're just milking the story now.
It's never going to end.