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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I fucking love your way of writing. I was addicted with "For the Love of his Son" and now this one has me just spinning. I LOVE how you build up the characters how the plot seems so smooth and flowing. I know--or think I do--what's comming next but still it eats me alive just waiting for the next update. These are quickly becoming my favorite fics EVER from any fandom and that is sasying alot. I think its because I can rely on you to deliever almost every week, and I get the outcome I want most but in a surprising fasion that doesn't appear dull, sickeningly sweet, or just down right over dramatic. Your stories are sweet but real, funny but angsty, and the bad guy gets his ass handed to him with swift actions. ^-^ I fucking LOVE Itachi and Sasuke in this one. I love how diabolically evil Sasuke is capable of being, and how Itachi is the "Devil". the realation ships in this story simply leave me flabbergasted. You are an amazing writer and I stand in awe of your fics. Please, please, continue this story as you have been, and I really hope to see Orochimaru get slaughter by both Uchiha's this time. ^-^
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I should be in bed right now, but I saw the update, and said to myself, "If I get all my work done by 11:30, I will treat myself and read this tonight!" Looking forward to reading this chapter helped me get through all of my work, so thank you very much!
I really enjoyed this chapter, especially the I-am-even-scarier-than-Itachi Sasuke moments. Then it was nice and sweet at the end where Sasuke and Naruto had that mental thing going. So great! Looking forward to the next chapter! :-) ~ Jelp
I really enjoyed this chapter, especially the I-am-even-scarier-than-Itachi Sasuke moments. Then it was nice and sweet at the end where Sasuke and Naruto had that mental thing going. So great! Looking forward to the next chapter! :-) ~ Jelp
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you. and by love you I mean I love your brain for coming up with this story. SasuNaru is love. (as is ItaNaru) and Itachi is a great and awesome devil. And Sasuke as mad as he was in this chapter was sexy. Evil!Sasuke is always fun. I look forward to the next chapter. Crazy!Naruto or not...cause he is fun too...
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, it's one of my favorites. I can't wait for the next chappie.
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_o Fuck, this is incredibly exciting. I had to read it in one go, I just couldn't stop.
I love your depiction of Itachi and SasuNaru is a wonderful pairing in this story.
I do hope all will be well with them...
Looking forward to an update!
I love your depiction of Itachi and SasuNaru is a wonderful pairing in this story.
I do hope all will be well with them...
Looking forward to an update!
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm on my phone right now & i was too lazy to log in but, oh-my-fucking-god, i had to review for that chap. just one thought was going through my head when all of interrogations and such was going on: this. is. fucking. awesome. it's like a uchiha mafia in this bitch! ^__^ fricking itachi and SASUKE! totally awesome chap despite the current situation! i would have never noticed the shortness compared to the last chap if you didn't say something in your a/n. fucking sasuke's crazy ass! *glomps him* his methods of getting information inspire me something fierce. wow. the next chapter is gonna be a one remember. ok, my rant is over. i'm so gonna bug my friend in CA and make sure she's reading this. looking foward to your next update whenever that maybe. have a great day . keep up the wonderful work!
~Devious
~Devious
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMIGOSH
OMIGOSH
O-MI-GOSH~!
total and complete suspence!
it's fatal..
and I'm dieing to know what'll happen next..
can't wait~!
'til then, hun ^O^
OMIGOSH
O-MI-GOSH~!
total and complete suspence!
it's fatal..
and I'm dieing to know what'll happen next..
can't wait~!
'til then, hun ^O^
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. Had my heart pounding by the end of the chapter. Can't wait for the next one :)
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was an adrenaline packed cry fest. Very good chapter!
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack!!! Man, I really really wanna know how this ends. Please continue soon....please.