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for The Demilitarized Zone

by lexjamandme

person charmpit
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG Sasuke has his king-sized nuts up now, doesn't he?!

Iruka is awake! They are both alive and all right! I'm so relieved!!!!

Itachi and Kisame had better be taking notes. And after this Sasuke should get a damn promotion!

SASUKE UCHIHA...HANDLE YOUR BUSINESS!
person gaara89
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG you can't leave it like this! Please update soon! I'm begging you!!
person patrysza
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! an awesome chapter love it ,waits for more :D
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just did the obligatory read over previous chapter cause obviously i like to torment myself lol

the ending... cant even comment on that. and i'm about to see anyway

Better things!: take out stock in aspirin... lol sasuke you sly dog! ;D

oh and i actualy teared up first time i read about naruto's rescue it was just so heartwrenching!
person animelover
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was just beyond cool ... and even though you said there was no humor, i kinda chuckled when sasu asks ita and kisa "did i stutter?" i mean, i could TOTALLY see him saying that! and boy did we get to see his dark side. geez, the uchiha genes rock!

thank you for waking iruka! ;-) oh, and any update--no matter what the length--is better than none. you absolutely ROCK!

c ya!
person Vox
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU!! You horrible, terrible person, you! *sniffle* There was the wait - dear god, the wait! - and then... and then...

*glomps* I'm in love with you. I'm currently worshipping at the altar of your bad-ass Sasuke. Please, pretty please, with sugar and sprinkles and syrup and ramen on top, PLEASE give us our chapter soon. I swear, I'll love you forever if you do!

*insert begging for Itachi-centric ficdom here* I love you, I love you.

Love!
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh you are so evil. You hear me, EVIL! Update Please?!?!?!
person Damp
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loove the fact that Iruka woke up!! I was so relieved, I could have cried!! Not only that, but a the Sasuke that was able to drive out information from Sakon was pretty...intimidating...and sexy.

ACK!

-Damp *has died from the suspense*
person Sancta
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG :dies: Do you know how to leave a cliff hanger or what!!! :sit impatiently: I'll kept the praises and god like worshiping until after the next chapter. Right now I am happily suffering from a heart attack of demilitarized goodness. Oh and before I forget, Itachi in little demon panties has got to be the sexiest thing ever written!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person despairs
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that Iruka is finally awake, and how Sasuke gave Itachi and Kisame tips on how to successfully interrogate an asshole and how Naruto totally pissed off Orochimaru by saying all those things he should have let Sasuke do to him (brilliant) and the little conversation between Kakashi and Sasuke. But what i loved best is how Naruto and Sasuke concentrated on each other so they would not fall completely to pieces. It's so very obvious those two are meant to be together, no matter how many people try to tear them apart.