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for The Demilitarized Zone

by lexjamandme

person Charlie
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke gets the title Prince of Darkness for being so scary in this chapter.
Thanks for that awesome chapter. My favorite chapter for the meantime.
person qwerty
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so good. Sasuke... so intense.
update
person digiditz
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If it makes you feel any better the line(s) “Save it,” Sasuke hissed, “You may be the devil, but you are nothing without your minions and one of us is missing.” Sasuke entered the bathroom but left a crack open, “So stop the big brother shit, put on your evil, lord of the darkness panties and find out who took my goddamn dobe!” made me laugh even in the middle of all the horrible suspense ridden drama.
person kanaro
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. I love the line "...put on your evil lord of darkness panties and help me find my goddamn dobe!" Beautiful. And I can't wait until the final showdown! (and the reunion sex.... ;) )
person DARKON
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! I knew it! The snake-bastard lives!! I hope Naruto won't be in his clutches for very long.

A VERY, VERY PISSED off Sasuke is really SCAREY. I wouldn't want to be in Orochimaru's shoes right now.
I think that there will be no doubt of his death if Sasuke gets his hands on him.

Excelent fic. I am enjoying this fic a lot. Keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon.



DARKON
person Danni
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate cliffhagers!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this story!!! Please post soon!!!!!!!!!! *gives a plate of brownies*
person TGyamiBakura
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG.......................O_O This story is fuxing amazing! I don't think I've EVER read a more well-written, entertaining, funny *I was LOL-ing the whole time*, eerily in-character AU fanfic in my entire life...o.o;; You, my dear, win. God...Gai...XDDD Itachi...omg i've developed a whole new love for him just because your story. The dark lord...Lucifer LMAO! So true. It's so believable it's ridiculous! Sasuke's character in this story is perfect. There couldn't be a better way for him to fall in love with Naruto without it going OOC. All i can think is "damn...you really know your Uchihas" I didn't think that seeing Naruto's more "intellectual" side would make me so happy until i read this. Awesome. I really REALLY hope you continue this...I'll bookmark this and everyday check to see if there's updates because i really like it XDD. I hope Sasuke is okay T______T PLEASE LET HIM BE OKAY!
person nyge98
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was the best chapter so far. The ending broke my heart especially with the cliffhanger. I can't wait till the next chapter.
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey that is so not cool I was totally into that then you just... new chapter please cause I am in love with this fic oh and if you could possibly e-mail me the next chapter is out I would love that me e-mail address is thediffrenceisimme@yahoo.com plz update and inform me !!!!!!!!!!!!! ^.^
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!! How could you leave it at that? I think i might die if i don't know what happens next!!! Even though that was a nice long, revaling chapter. Poor baby naruto, i can only imagine the horror of having your baby taken away from you. i wonder if in that situation getting a random note makes you breath easyer, knowing their is a chance. anyways, another wonderful chapter... as if i could expect anything less from you.