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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Quoting Sasuke, 'Fucking genius! that's what you are!'
L.O.V.E it.., every single thing, every detail, every portrayal, every email, every dialogue... love the way naruto call kakashi dada, and love the way kakashi call naruto sunshine and being very protective about naruto (we don't get to see it in the real series..,)
.., oh,. i just can't get enough of it.., so, please update soon before I decide to blow your body to pieces..,
oh, btw, have i mentioned that you are a fucking genius??
L.O.V.E it.., every single thing, every detail, every portrayal, every email, every dialogue... love the way naruto call kakashi dada, and love the way kakashi call naruto sunshine and being very protective about naruto (we don't get to see it in the real series..,)
.., oh,. i just can't get enough of it.., so, please update soon before I decide to blow your body to pieces..,
oh, btw, have i mentioned that you are a fucking genius??
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is really fantastic. This is probably one of my favorite fan fictions that i have read. I hope you continue updating when you can. I really want to know what happens!
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh some ones going to die. Than brot back just the torcher them and kill agin,slowly. Please update as soon as you can! Please?!?
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an exciting chapter! I even like the way you include the flashbacks. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU!!! ARG!!! Bad cliffy! My God, this is so good though. I really loved how you kept having everyone say, "Why not brother, or cousin, or crazy uncle who no one...?" That was comic genius and had me rolling. Very entertaining, well=plotted and well paced story. I am truly enjoying it. Five Stars! Oh, and the parody of Itachi and the Duckies and Minions, is just too funny. I fell in love from the start. I actually think the first chapter was one of the best. And I love how you work in the funny e-mails and texts. So very office humor. J'adore! Write More!
~AA666
~AA666
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! What a way to end the chapter. So much happened and now you've left me hanging on the ledge, waiting to find out what's going on! Please make sure you update fairly soon, or I shall die from not knowing :)
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The white haired man smiled innocently and pushed up wire rimmed glasses with two fingers, “Kabuto Yakushi, sir.”
The snake bastard lives! Not for long because I'm going to kill him myself! *grabs Yaoi Fangirl armor and a heavy metal bat* "I come for you, you slimy snake! Let my Naru go!"
Poor Naru-chan and Sasuke. Not again! I hope Naruto will be okay. Man is Itchi going to be pissed when he finds out. Kakashi going to have a heart attack.
Can't wait for more!
=)
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Want MORE! I think this is a great and really well written story! Can't wait for next chapter!
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...thats one helluva evil cliffhanger there =[ I think my heart stopped for a second at the very end. I just realized that when i read your stories i feel like i'm reading a transcript to an actual movie...it's just that damn good.
I got all teary eyed at the part where they found Naruto in that basement in a cage with bugs and all bruised up -sobs- that was traumatizing.
But Kakashi is awake now...yay! But now i'm worried about Sasuke...boo! lol my emotions are literally all over the place...well done :P
I got all teary eyed at the part where they found Naruto in that basement in a cage with bugs and all bruised up -sobs- that was traumatizing.
But Kakashi is awake now...yay! But now i'm worried about Sasuke...boo! lol my emotions are literally all over the place...well done :P
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my...that was the best chapter ever! so orochi(pedo)maru is still alive huh? dang...i hope u update soon! this chapter was awesome!