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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is FAN-TAS-TIC!!! cliffhangers in every chapters! I can't stop reading and re-reading it! I simply love it!
How cute 8 y-o sasuke was, in love with a blonde blue-eyed cello player! Thanks for telling us about itachi's wife and what happened to her. It's so sad... but little naoki really takes after his father, he is soooo CUTE when he is with 'naru'! Now everyone knows they are not truly engaged but it's only a matter of time...
Kakashi's reaction to the new couple was illarious (growling, really?).OMG Sasuke can't be dead, right? though if naruto hadn't called him he would have died in the car's explosion. Is Orochimaru still alive? since kabuto, his eternal accomplice, covered form him as a police officer...
It will be HELL to wait for next chapter! As for the no-lemon i guess we will have to wait for SasuNaru's honeymoon, right?
How cute 8 y-o sasuke was, in love with a blonde blue-eyed cello player! Thanks for telling us about itachi's wife and what happened to her. It's so sad... but little naoki really takes after his father, he is soooo CUTE when he is with 'naru'! Now everyone knows they are not truly engaged but it's only a matter of time...
Kakashi's reaction to the new couple was illarious (growling, really?).OMG Sasuke can't be dead, right? though if naruto hadn't called him he would have died in the car's explosion. Is Orochimaru still alive? since kabuto, his eternal accomplice, covered form him as a police officer...
It will be HELL to wait for next chapter! As for the no-lemon i guess we will have to wait for SasuNaru's honeymoon, right?
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was intense! I about broke the ledge off my desk I was gripping it so hard by the end of the story. I CANNOT wait for your next chapter. You have possibly written my favorite story ever, though All the Small Things is a close second.
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAHHH!!! NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
Poor Naru-chan. *beats evil cliffy with FairyNiamhs nerf bat*
Sasuke and the Devil to the rescue??
Poor Naru-chan. *beats evil cliffy with FairyNiamhs nerf bat*
Sasuke and the Devil to the rescue??
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to tell you... you have NASTY sense of the dramatic... That was a horrible(for the reader) place to end it... However if you want the critique from a writer... it was brilliant
That, however, does not mean that I REALLY hope that you don't make us wait too long for another chapter!! Because It will drive me nuts!
And I'd say more about how perfect your characters are, but I'm certain I've said that before!
Slave
That, however, does not mean that I REALLY hope that you don't make us wait too long for another chapter!! Because It will drive me nuts!
And I'd say more about how perfect your characters are, but I'm certain I've said that before!
Slave
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAH! The long length of this chapter does NOT make up for the wait because you left it THERE. GRRRR. Meanie.
Just kidding. :-) Nothing needs to be "made-up for" with a long wait since you have such a great story!
I really like the part towards the end with the Kakashi-Naruto discussion about Naruto saying he loves Sasuke, and Kakashi pretty much saying that he already knew that. :-)
As always, looking forward to the next chapter! Not that I need to really tell you either of these points as you probably already know, but amazing story, and keep up the great work! ~ Jelp
Just kidding. :-) Nothing needs to be "made-up for" with a long wait since you have such a great story!
I really like the part towards the end with the Kakashi-Naruto discussion about Naruto saying he loves Sasuke, and Kakashi pretty much saying that he already knew that. :-)
As always, looking forward to the next chapter! Not that I need to really tell you either of these points as you probably already know, but amazing story, and keep up the great work! ~ Jelp
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nnnnoooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!
that ending was evil... EVIL...
that ending was evil... EVIL...
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!
That was a crazy cliffhanger!!!
I knew something bad was about to happen when Kabuto was the officer. Orochimaru isn't really dead! Ack!
Great writing!
update!!!
That was a crazy cliffhanger!!!
I knew something bad was about to happen when Kabuto was the officer. Orochimaru isn't really dead! Ack!
Great writing!
update!!!
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! You can't leave it there! I need to know what happens next! Great story, update soon please.
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ANOTHER CLIFFIE? NOO!!
But once again another heart-stopping chapter. You pull out so many surprises I swear, I was going to have a heart attack. Kakashi waking up, Kabuto being the doctor which therefore tells me Orochimaru is NOT dead, and the kidnapping at the end. I loved it aboslutely loved it.
Please please update soon!
But once again another heart-stopping chapter. You pull out so many surprises I swear, I was going to have a heart attack. Kakashi waking up, Kabuto being the doctor which therefore tells me Orochimaru is NOT dead, and the kidnapping at the end. I loved it aboslutely loved it.
Please please update soon!
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHEE
another chapter!
I love you, hun
truly I do
but MAN
what an ending!
that's like super-mondo-explosion cliff hanger right thar
and it makes me seriously hope that it won't be another two week until the next chapter is up
cuz I totally can't wait to see what going to happen next!
'til then, hun ^o^
another chapter!
I love you, hun
truly I do
but MAN
what an ending!
that's like super-mondo-explosion cliff hanger right thar
and it makes me seriously hope that it won't be another two week until the next chapter is up
cuz I totally can't wait to see what going to happen next!
'til then, hun ^o^