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for The Demilitarized Zone

by lexjamandme

schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another fabulous chapter of course! I especially loved this line, "...sold his soul to the devil to look like a fucking angel." The contrast between devil and angel is great.
person Damp
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I think I love you. . .JKING, but I hope you take it as a complement!!

-Damp *:)*
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It's great! Please continue it soon!
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squeals*

That was great!!!!

Hahah, I love Naruto! The part where he ran into the bathroom after Sasuke was hilarious.

And Sasuke drugging Naruto was so cute. xP.

Thanks soo much for updating!!

=]
person lo
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter this is such a great story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
person animelover
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are the ONLY author i know who could have humor, WAFF, and dark mystery all in one chapter. honestly, how the HECK do you do that? i have to say the scene where sasu is explaining to naru about their engagement can only be topped by the earlier chapter spouting their emails to the evil itachi. absolutely hilarious!

of course, orochi isn't dead ... i mean the guy is a freak and can't die, right? hmmmm, well we'll have to wait and see. LOL!

thanks for the update, adn by the way, i feel your pain about the "life sucks" issues. ;-)
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's awesome! hahaha Poor Naruto and Sasuke. I love it, I can't wait for more!
=)
person Charlie
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I miss the emails.
person Halskr
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. I think Naruto took the news very well!!!
person Kimra
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ha ha. I love Naruto and Sasuke interaction.

I'd be happy if it was all just ahppy interaction, but I'll read on through the plot anyway! :D