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by lexjamandme

person minn yun
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
stroller scene and the file's picture are so cute. pity that we don't have more of them. but dad!kashi and papa!ruka are 2 loving ppl, i can't see 1 without the other. and with their sunshine, what a happy fun(ky) family they make together. i hope they get better very soon.
person Rai
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“Now, little brother, this is exactly what I was referring to when I asked if there was anything ‘more’ you would like to share.” - XD! <3

AH! THE NEXT CHAPTER! xD And oh, how I love it! The plot is thickening, and now I'm deatly curious about that 1½ month of Naruto's childhood without documentation... Hn. And the last punchline? Got me laughing and blushing so hard that I fell off my chair <3 And who's the secret assassin? Lots of questions, makes me happy. And so curious I get frustrated. :P

ALL MY LOVE,
AND KEEP ON WRITING! :D
person Vox
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*blushes!*

Umm, wow, um, thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

Let's see... canon, Naruto and Sasuke make sense. He was unnaturally close to both of them... Of course, for difficult decisions, the kami gave us threesomes for a reason.
*still blushing!*

Oh yea! I love you for giving us a wonderful, heart-felt Itachi moment alongside his normal bastard-ness. I love you for humiliating our poor Sasuke by revealing his 'engagement' to everyone (and I can't wait for Naru-chan to find out!). I love you, love you lots and lots for making me laugh and making an otherwise horrendous weekend awesome. I can now give a happy screech and send my roommate running for his computer to read the newest chapter of your stories.

Much love!
person Lechan
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I laughed so hard I was crying at the end there. I must say that I am addicted to this story. I Loved "For the Love of his Son" and this one just made me an avid fan of your work. ^-^ I'm just burning up with questions now, ranging from Please let the gaurd be normal and not a scum bag working for Orochi-asswipe, to OMG please tell me what I think happened to NAruto when he was five did not happen... to LOL How will Sasuke explain this one. ^_^ great story, can't wait for more. And now I'm off to read your newest story. ^-^
person Raholea
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww, man, i love the suspense! sasuke's gonna have hell to pay with both itachi and naruto, and honestly, i hope kakashi and iruka both survive this whole ordeal. and that naruto doesn't try to rip sasuke apart for the little slip- up of proclaiming themselves engaged. i like the work! keep it up!!
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...I...I d-.....umm....well...My mind is blink. I am in shock. O.O That was fucking alsome. I love that chappter! XD The sean with Sauske and Naruto as babys, was just so...*SQUIL!*...CUTE! I love it! Please, please, please update as soon as you can. I really need to know what happens next! Great Work! ^___^

person lo
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter this story is coming together wonderfully.
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gah! You ended it too soon! =[

Oh well, it was still pretty interesting, and I couldn't stop reading.

*giggles* Honorable Judge Watanabe! <3<3<3<3<3
person NiChee
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i luv u so much! luv this fic to bits n pieces! i hope u update asap coz i can't wait to find out more. its getting really interesting!
person gaara89
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!