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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens as expected... nyah!! I want to know what happens!!! nYah!!! I love this story so much!!1 Great job! Good pace and as always darned cliffies...grrr...
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm still stressing over Kakashi and Iruka =[ But this helped cheer me up..
'Kakashi stood up and walked toward the stroller. Looking in he saw his Sunshine cuddled up to a dark haired baby who had his pale hand lying against Naruto’s scarred cheek. Both babies were asleep and had the slightest smiles on their tiny mouths.'
Aww! How cute was that?!
But then i went back to worrying at the end...when Naruto was 5 Orochimaru must have abused him -cries- I'm not really a nail biter type person but this is really making me want to start.
'Kakashi stood up and walked toward the stroller. Looking in he saw his Sunshine cuddled up to a dark haired baby who had his pale hand lying against Naruto’s scarred cheek. Both babies were asleep and had the slightest smiles on their tiny mouths.'
Aww! How cute was that?!
But then i went back to worrying at the end...when Naruto was 5 Orochimaru must have abused him -cries- I'm not really a nail biter type person but this is really making me want to start.
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hinata fainted. Right? I really like the flashbacks in between. It really gives us an idea of what happened in the past.
I really hate Orchimaru so much. I hope he gets what's coming to him soon.
I really hate Orchimaru so much. I hope he gets what's coming to him soon.
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what an absolutely perfect cliffie! OMG!!!! somehow you manage to interject some humor in the angst. terribly clever of you! i'm just dying to see how sasuke gets out of this situation, and i'm guessing orochimaru is the hitman's boss; but then the question is what would he gain since naruto is an adult? hmmm, maybe kakairu are haunted because there's some uchiha money involved?
so many questions, so little time. lol! carry on!
so many questions, so little time. lol! carry on!
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you thank you thank you! I have been waiting--with bated breath, no less--for an update to this fic. It's so exciting! The whole schpiel about Neji's red tie was delightfully engaging. I love GaaNeji almost as much as I do GaaNaru! And, once again it appears, Sakura-chan gets the proverbial shaft. Oh, well...can't be helped I suppose.
Now then: as much as I do enjoy the plot of this fic (and I do, I'm not patronizing here), how many more chapters must we all wait before Sasuke gives in to his urges and plunders the fair Naruto? I can hardly wait!
You are a phenomenal fanfic writer.
Now then: as much as I do enjoy the plot of this fic (and I do, I'm not patronizing here), how many more chapters must we all wait before Sasuke gives in to his urges and plunders the fair Naruto? I can hardly wait!
You are a phenomenal fanfic writer.
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yea!!! an update!!! Thank you thank you thank you.... oh and more please.
You write so wonderfully and I love the way you write your characters!!!
Thanks
Slave
You write so wonderfully and I love the way you write your characters!!!
Thanks
Slave
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I love it, love it, love it! You're so great at making readers jump from one emotion to another, especially at the end there. The second to last scene it's :GASP: someone is following Naruto! And then, it's HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! SASUKE GOT CAUGHT! That's great. This story is great. You are great. :-) Keep up the great work. :-D ~ Jelp
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First, I would like to say that I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR ITACHI. He makes me cackle and squirm with glee. Second, are you still sending out update messages? If so, I would love to be added to the list. This story has me competely captivated.
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is beyond awesome. I admit, at first I was a bit sceptic, but you've made me a believer. ;-)
The emails sent between individuals(...mainly to and from Itachi)were highly amusing, the characters were as IC as one can possibly keep them in a modern day AU(...I love your Itachi), Naruto's relationship with his parents(...both pairs of them)was realistic and detailed, the explanations that were given for both boys' circumstances in life and personalities were believable, Sasuke's thoughts regarding his "return to Uchiha speak from now on" were hilarious despite the circumstances and I can't wait to learn what will happen from now on(...the whole "we believe it was not an accident" has me on my toes).
The emails sent between individuals(...mainly to and from Itachi)were highly amusing, the characters were as IC as one can possibly keep them in a modern day AU(...I love your Itachi), Naruto's relationship with his parents(...both pairs of them)was realistic and detailed, the explanations that were given for both boys' circumstances in life and personalities were believable, Sasuke's thoughts regarding his "return to Uchiha speak from now on" were hilarious despite the circumstances and I can't wait to learn what will happen from now on(...the whole "we believe it was not an accident" has me on my toes).
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are brilliant. I love you. *huggles*
No but seriously. Your story maketh me much happiness ^____~ <3 Keep it up, it is ever so lovely. (Oh btw I dont think your Sasuke is cliched at all. Its the way Sasuke is. That hardly cliched. Its good to stay true to a character <3)
ps. the emails they write are beyond all mortal hilarity.
No but seriously. Your story maketh me much happiness ^____~ <3 Keep it up, it is ever so lovely. (Oh btw I dont think your Sasuke is cliched at all. Its the way Sasuke is. That hardly cliched. Its good to stay true to a character <3)
ps. the emails they write are beyond all mortal hilarity.