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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG This fic is awesome. I read the first chapter ages and ages ago and I can't believe how much you've updated since then. Can't wait to see how things pan out from here, and how Sasuke will explain the fiance thing to Naruto.
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is getting quite a bit better as we go along. I am waiting, with barely-baited breath, for the next chapter. (I think I check your story three or four times a day...)
I would like to note two things: one, Itachi needs more love. We adore Itachi, especially evil Itachi, but it would be cute to watch him get bowled over and fall for someone. (I can already see the glaring and cussing this would involve. ^^) Two, if Kakashi and Iruka are in any way perminantly harmed, that dragon won't save you. It is a physical being, and as such, still bound by physical laws. It can only kill so many of us at once. We number in the thousands. Someone will get through.
Much love, as always!
I would like to note two things: one, Itachi needs more love. We adore Itachi, especially evil Itachi, but it would be cute to watch him get bowled over and fall for someone. (I can already see the glaring and cussing this would involve. ^^) Two, if Kakashi and Iruka are in any way perminantly harmed, that dragon won't save you. It is a physical being, and as such, still bound by physical laws. It can only kill so many of us at once. We number in the thousands. Someone will get through.
Much love, as always!
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“I’m Naruto’s fiancé.”
I loved that part!
But still... WHY?!? Why does life suck? Poor poor Naruto!
Evil, evil nurse! I'll strangle her with my bare hands. She did it on purpose, I just know it! That which! I'll beat her to death with a rubber chicken!
Detective huh. I hope the detevtive, figures out what's going on. Why would someone want to kill Kakashi?
I'm glad Sasuke is there for Naruto. Poor, poor Naru-chan.
I still love the “I’m Naruto’s fiancé.” part.
Please update soon. I can't stand the wait! Please, please please!
Poor Naruto.
I love this story, it makes me giggle and cry.
=')
I loved that part!
But still... WHY?!? Why does life suck? Poor poor Naruto!
Evil, evil nurse! I'll strangle her with my bare hands. She did it on purpose, I just know it! That which! I'll beat her to death with a rubber chicken!
Detective huh. I hope the detevtive, figures out what's going on. Why would someone want to kill Kakashi?
I'm glad Sasuke is there for Naruto. Poor, poor Naru-chan.
I still love the “I’m Naruto’s fiancé.” part.
Please update soon. I can't stand the wait! Please, please please!
Poor Naruto.
I love this story, it makes me giggle and cry.
=')
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you intertwined the past with the present in chapter 7. It was so beautifully written that way.
This chapter had me in tears almost all the way through. I'm so worried about Kakashi and Iruka. Please let them be okay =[
I loved how Sasuke stayed with Naruto the whole time and how he claimed to be his fiance..that part made me smile :D
This chapter had me in tears almost all the way through. I'm so worried about Kakashi and Iruka. Please let them be okay =[
I loved how Sasuke stayed with Naruto the whole time and how he claimed to be his fiance..that part made me smile :D
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the plot thickens. Man, I can't begin to verbalize how much this story kicks ass. I love how Sasuke has verbal diarrhea, though. He's so cute. I wonder how Naruto will react to the news. Was the insulin really an accident? Was that a tip off? I suppose I will have to wait for the next installment of TDZ. AAAAhhh! So many cliff hangers! Please don't make this a habit or I fear I shall go bald... & then I'll sue you (unless you put a disclaimer: warning reading of this chapter could be hazardous to your hair) ^_^
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fucking awesome! im always at the egde of my seat! u rule!
Your Admirer,
~cant tell~
Your Admirer,
~cant tell~
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! >_< THE PLOT THICKENS! OMG! I WANNA KNOW! And i love the "i'm his fiancee"-thing, totally brilliant! :D
love this, it's freaking awesome! looking forward to next chapter, AND THANK YOU FOR THE EMAIL! please keep it up, and keep sending me those emails :D
much nerdy yaoi love,
Rai
love this, it's freaking awesome! looking forward to next chapter, AND THANK YOU FOR THE EMAIL! please keep it up, and keep sending me those emails :D
much nerdy yaoi love,
Rai
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
... it's a conspiracy?! that damn bitch nurse!! burn! burn in hell woman!! (clearly the nurse, not you :)) what if kakashi ends up with hypoxic brain injury?! noooooo! *sniffles* and then sasuke lying to the doctor is gonna come out now? oohh dear lol what a disaster ha! OH YEAH! sasuke wondering if anything had gone on with kiba and naruto was hilarious. albeit that it lasting 2 secs... reaching for the funny moments in this one you can see :S oh well
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you have to hurry with the next ch please
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!
ACK! How could you leave it like that? Does that mean Minato's and Kushina's death wasn't an accident too? (Well, an old lady was the cause but still... you never know). Who would want to kill Kakashi and Iruka? I hope both of them pull through... don't let them die!
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ACK! How could you leave it like that? Does that mean Minato's and Kushina's death wasn't an accident too? (Well, an old lady was the cause but still... you never know). Who would want to kill Kakashi and Iruka? I hope both of them pull through... don't let them die!
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