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for The Demilitarized Zone

by lexjamandme

schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not an accident? OMG!!!! You better update this soon!!!!!!
person TsubakiTsukihime
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have read all of your stories so far & I have to say this is my favorite. I love the way you portray the characters, especially the e-mails, those amuse me to no end, and sasuke's inability to control what he says is great too. I can't wait for more chapters, you are a wonderful writer.
person Imagy
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
and the plot thickens!
What a wonderful twist, babe ^o^
I also love hearing Sasuke's views on the whole matter
it's actually really insiteful, and hilarious
aaaaaand~!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
'till then, lovey :D
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omgsh! No...Iruka and Kakashi cant die!!!

Please don't kill them off =/

I wonder who hit them..orochimaru, perhaps?
person lo
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, chapter seven was heavy. It actually was tugging at the old heart strings. This chapter was wonderfully written.
person nyge98
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I have been waiting forever for them to finally kiss and it was great. However, that cliffhanger was trully evil. You have me so worried for Naurto's parents. I need the next chapter. PLEASE
person Vox
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*worships*
*adores*
*begs for more*
*begs for an Ita-centric fic*
...
*starts building a catapult*
person SammyZoom
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I love this story soo much <3333
keep up the great work :]
person Windkaizer
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG BECKY! This story is just so damn good, and I hate cliffies. Please update soon. I will say this though, I don't even like AU stories, and I fell in love with this one. Good job, and once again, update!
person Rai
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AARGH! THE CLIFFHANGER! KILL ME NOW!! or even better.... write another chapter? :D
This is awesome. This is the nectar of gods for my poor tortured soul. This is sexy yaoi bishis at their very best. This is totally addictive.
And I love every BIT of it! :D (The emails. Oh the emails. I fall off my chair laughing every time, and I go back inte the chapters just to read them again - ah. I love you, and your fanfiction. ;D) And the way you write the characters? I want you to replace the Naruto-crew. You're just THAT good.

With all this said - PLEASE send me an email when you update, since I suck at finding/noticing/searching for updates. It would be much appreciated, since I don't want to miss this. And I promise to review every time. :P

ALL MY NERDY LOVE -
Rai.