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for The Demilitarized Zone

by lexjamandme

person lo
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh drama. Nice work I can wait to see what happens next. I love the way you write.
person Jelp
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack! I was all like, Hahahaha! Such a funny chapter, especially with Sasuke telling Itachi to leave his duckies alone (hilarious!), and then O.o Wow! Those boys sure move fast, to NO! It better not be Iruka and Kakashi! And then, I got to thinking, is Naruto talking about Iruka and Kakashi, or is he talking about Minato and Kushina? I really hope nothing happened to Iruka and/or Kakashi. ::sigh:: Looking forward to the next update to figure out what's going on! ~ Jelp
person Word_Slave
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, I was so happy you added another chapter.... I guess what they say is true, Keep your pitchforks close and your dragon slaying swords even closer!

Okay, so the appropriate reply to that ending is... what, what what??? What the fuck??? What happened to Kakashi and Iruka???

Ohhh, don't leave us hanging.
Slave
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No. Oh NO YOU DIDNT! Considering naruto and his parents interaction imy second fav thing about this story... aahh So hating you right now! *pouts* But even though i knew something was coming at the end i still looooved that kiss YAY!! though it so fell out of nowhere lol, i was like 'wait a sec WHAT did i just read about LIPS TOUCHING?!!' haha good times. Also glad it doesn't seem like the duckies got fired, and 4 ppl were missing?? hmmm wonder who the other 2 cd be.

So you LEAVE IRUKA AND KAKASHI ALONE and all will be well in the world even if sauke hugging and comforting naruto at the end was soo OMG aawww inducing
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can Naruto not catch a break?! UPDATE!! What happened?!
person digiditz
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn. I should have known you weere going to pull something like this! Gaaah!

Love to 'hate' you!
person Imagy
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wah, oh no!
what on earth could have happened to Naruto's parents?
and right when he and Sasuke were finally realizing that all they had really wanted to do was canoodle
this is so aweful and suspenceful
and
I can't wait to see what happens next~!
c yah then, babe ;D
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahh!! Oh no! =[

I hope Kakashi and Iruka are okay..I'm not exactly sure if their talkin about Kakashi and Iruka..or Kushina and Minato

*shakes head confusedly*
person qwerty
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How the hell could you leave it there? Argh! That sucks. Kakashi and Iruka better be okay... especially since after all the crap Naruto had to go through. Great chapter though.
update (soon)!
person animelover
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is it even possible to laugh and cry all within the same chapter? omg! what happened to naru-chan parents? is it his real ones or kakairu? please update soon! cliffies i can handle, but this one is too much!