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by lexjamandme

person gaara89
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What happened? Nooo you can't do that! Please write more soon!!!
person Hilary
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One word: EVIL! I love your stories really I do, but why must you attack the only family Naruto has...?! Uh I would keep Fluffy ready for pitch forks! But I really loved this chapter, despite the huge cliffy. The way you write Itachi is very interesting. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh No! What's going on! Evil cliffy! Naruto's parents? Iruka and Kakashi or his birth parents? I need to know more!

I loved this chapter. Glad Naruto and Sasuke are getting closer.
=)
person NiChee
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i can't stop laughing about the "duckies" thing. rofl

wonder what happened to kakashi and iruka? i hope u didn't kill them!

update soon k?
person Kimra
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a mean place to stop the story... *sigh* I await updates.
person Mija
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooh my GAWD! you soooooooooo cant leaving hanging like THAT!....what happened??? his parents as in Kakashi and Iruka or his bio parents??? oh man you are killing me you know that??? but alas tis nothing I can do..*and not cause of your dragon* Dragons love me, have them all over my house they are my pets...anyhow I unlike my pitch fork wielding co fans, shall not chase you down with a pitch fork, it does not good to pressure an author to write something, when you do that you get crappy chapters, so I leave you to your creative juices, buuuuuuuuttttt ifn you take too long, I do have this nifty cast iron frying pan I can dig out of my cupboards...not for you mind ya, but if my charms dont work on the dragon then I would have to sadly use it to konk fluffy on da head so that I could convince you of your great need to update this wonderful fic that you have me salivating and laughing and yanking my hair out at...all kidding aside, twas and is a wonderful fic and the last chapter was the best...what the heck did Itachi DO to the duckies??? and awwww Sasu cares for his duckies toooo...and you soo have to love the emails those two send, specially Naru's omg they crack me up...till next chapter, which I hope is soon, be well safe and happy, thanks for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now i know hy you needed fluffy (can i say evul authoress of cliffy doom). now i know why itaci is so sadistically cooly evil. ican't wait to see the next chapter.
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Argh!!!! Cliffhanger!!!! I love Itachi!!! LOL Duckies? LOL I love that!!!! :D
person Pundit
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhangers are evil. Thought you should know...
person charmpit
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG what happened to KakaIru?

Please update again soon!!!!