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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I lost another night of my life re-reading this.
You know, Itachi is so f*cking cool in this, have you considered doing an Itachi story? I'm not sure who you would team him with(please not Deraida. If you wanted to do crack, you could team him with Gai... How cool would that be, though? You could torture the minions and duckies even more. Just a thought.
You know, Itachi is so f*cking cool in this, have you considered doing an Itachi story? I'm not sure who you would team him with(please not Deraida. If you wanted to do crack, you could team him with Gai... How cool would that be, though? You could torture the minions and duckies even more. Just a thought.
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I got to the part where Orochimaru licked Naruto's ear and I actually got a chill. Everytime that particular sene passes through my mind I shudder and I swear I can feel someones fingers on my neck.
That was so friggen creepy, and your work is amazing. Keep up the good work. ^-^
That was so friggen creepy, and your work is amazing. Keep up the good work. ^-^
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, this chapter and the one before it were amazing. All the little moments with a surprisingly endearing young Naruto. He was just like a real child ought to be, not too sensitive or whiny but also light and cute. I was amazed at your ability to depict him in the perfect manner at that age. The interaction between Naruto and Sasuke is dynamic and powerful. I only have one pet peeve about his and any other story that uses it. Naruto only called Sasuke a bastard a few times and before he left the village had already stopped using it in regards to him. Sasuke only called Naruto a dobe ONCE and its meaning really has no context in this story, that being the term 'dead last'. Sasuke doesn't know enough about Naruto at the point in the story he started using it to call him that. But, all in all, one of the best written stroies with some great Naruto and Sasuke inteaction and some wonderful hints at a less than stellar past for Naruto. You also manage to portray Sasuke's onfusion and lack of understanding his and Naruto's relationship really well. I'm looking forward to continuing with this little gem but I had to stop to comment on it now.
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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Wow! I've been seeing this story on reclists everywhere and I finally started reading it sunday night, knowing I had to get my butt up and go to work the next morning. For the past three nights I've been up reading this and finally finished it last night but because it was so late, I didn't get a chance to review.
Thank you so much for posting this wonderful piece! It made me love Itachi even more than I already did! He was so devious, and the emails/text messages, those had me DYING laughing. The relationship between Naruto and Sasuke had my attention the whole time, but I love the actions in the Demilitarized Zone! The duckies assaulting each other and launching stuff over cubicals, that reminds me of my job when things get slow. I even love their titles! Lou, Minions and duckies! Those are the best!!!
There really aren't words for what I feel about this story other than I absolutely love it!
Amazing work!
Ezzy
Wow! I've been seeing this story on reclists everywhere and I finally started reading it sunday night, knowing I had to get my butt up and go to work the next morning. For the past three nights I've been up reading this and finally finished it last night but because it was so late, I didn't get a chance to review.
Thank you so much for posting this wonderful piece! It made me love Itachi even more than I already did! He was so devious, and the emails/text messages, those had me DYING laughing. The relationship between Naruto and Sasuke had my attention the whole time, but I love the actions in the Demilitarized Zone! The duckies assaulting each other and launching stuff over cubicals, that reminds me of my job when things get slow. I even love their titles! Lou, Minions and duckies! Those are the best!!!
There really aren't words for what I feel about this story other than I absolutely love it!
Amazing work!
Ezzy
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou for finishing this it was a pleasure to read.
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
On FF.net somebody has a story up with the same title as this one and its written in Portuguese.
Since i dont speak that language, i'm not sure if they are stealing your story
or not but some of the words and format look very similar to yours.
Not sure if you knew that or not...just thought i would let you know.
I didnt know how else to get in contact with you about it.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4438871/1/The_Demilitarized_Zone
Since i dont speak that language, i'm not sure if they are stealing your story
or not but some of the words and format look very similar to yours.
Not sure if you knew that or not...just thought i would let you know.
I didnt know how else to get in contact with you about it.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4438871/1/The_Demilitarized_Zone
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this fic and the others of your's that I read. Do you think that when you add to So Help Me God you can send me an email with the web address to let me know?
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's about time I reviewed this absolutely brilliant story, and so I have to say I have already read it more then twice and it's my favorite Naruto story with For the Love of His Son tightly behind. Your Itachi is excellent, I haven't encountered a better implemented Itachi in any story so far, and every scene he was part of was pure divine joy!...especially those sotfty glimpses between his cold emotionless exterior and stoic-ness and imposing sadistic character you shaped. I want more.
You really carried it out perfectly, really, wet dream of every Itachi admirer (though, I wouldn't have said no to a gay version as well; that would be Celestial).
Oh, and aside from the more angsty ambience it had, For the Love of His Son's Itachi was so twisted and wicked and cruel that I couldn't worship him as much as at The DMZ. But then, there were other terrific elements to it that I will go into detail when I will review it as well.
Damn, I had so much more to say during the reading... **trying to remember**
Oh, yes, your medley of humor, and romance, and action, and suspense and gay sexuality and evilness and family values and sweetness and emotional struggles was fucking incredible; I laughed and cried more then once; you made it very sensible realistic and during it all very sharp and well written and witty. Riveting...
I don’t have enough energy to describe all the things about your NaruSasu but their relationship dynamics were marvelous; I loved the way you built it and their cat and mouse riots were as good as their sappy romantic new couple scenes which I adored.
Oh, there was a scene towards the end, in the conference room when Naruto and Sasuke quarreled about their vocabulary in the conference room and the bedroom; fucking brilliant.
Oh, and Itachi manipulating them to take the step to make their engagement valid was so sweet and did I mention brilliant? :)
Yes, so there were lots of brilliant features and development… like the emails! They were most definitely brilliant; Narutos animated and humored ones and in contrast, Itachis…dare I say…playfully evil ones and Sasukes terse ones. Brilliant.
I hope you will continue writing, I think you are very talented. Thanks!
Merav.
You really carried it out perfectly, really, wet dream of every Itachi admirer (though, I wouldn't have said no to a gay version as well; that would be Celestial).
Oh, and aside from the more angsty ambience it had, For the Love of His Son's Itachi was so twisted and wicked and cruel that I couldn't worship him as much as at The DMZ. But then, there were other terrific elements to it that I will go into detail when I will review it as well.
Damn, I had so much more to say during the reading... **trying to remember**
Oh, yes, your medley of humor, and romance, and action, and suspense and gay sexuality and evilness and family values and sweetness and emotional struggles was fucking incredible; I laughed and cried more then once; you made it very sensible realistic and during it all very sharp and well written and witty. Riveting...
I don’t have enough energy to describe all the things about your NaruSasu but their relationship dynamics were marvelous; I loved the way you built it and their cat and mouse riots were as good as their sappy romantic new couple scenes which I adored.
Oh, there was a scene towards the end, in the conference room when Naruto and Sasuke quarreled about their vocabulary in the conference room and the bedroom; fucking brilliant.
Oh, and Itachi manipulating them to take the step to make their engagement valid was so sweet and did I mention brilliant? :)
Yes, so there were lots of brilliant features and development… like the emails! They were most definitely brilliant; Narutos animated and humored ones and in contrast, Itachis…dare I say…playfully evil ones and Sasukes terse ones. Brilliant.
I hope you will continue writing, I think you are very talented. Thanks!
Merav.
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Before I re-read this made of awesome fic, I wanted to take a moment to tell you that I read out the emails in this fic to some friends when they came over, because I found them so very funny.
They're not in to the fandom, they don't know the characters, but they laughed their asses off anyways.
They're not in to the fandom, they don't know the characters, but they laughed their asses off anyways.
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You won't believe how many times you made me laugh through this story. Or the weird noises I ekpt making. Or how many times I actually CLAPPED MY HANDS in joy (damn, that was so weird).
Ah you did such great work! I enjoyed it so much. Thankyou!
(next time I read this fic I will probably give you some quotes; I hope, I'm just too tired now since it's in the middle of the night and I've been reading this the whole afternoon. *smile)
//Very contented reader. *wink*
Ah you did such great work! I enjoyed it so much. Thankyou!
(next time I read this fic I will probably give you some quotes; I hope, I'm just too tired now since it's in the middle of the night and I've been reading this the whole afternoon. *smile)
//Very contented reader. *wink*