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by lexjamandme

person Billy
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE ITACHI!!!
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They're gonna wake up holding hands! get ready for it... aaaaawwwwwww :) :) :D I was clapping like a retard ha! at the end of this chapter. muuuch better than last chapter's ending that i couldnt even review (ggrrr stupid sas leaving that out where naruto might see, stupid naruto looking through other ppls things). As usual i adore whenever naru talks to his parents, they are so close its ridiculously sweet :) And OF COURSE i just knew someone was gonna get injured on that mountain thingy, so glad they're back on even BETTER terms at this chapters end, i was worried it was gonna drag on forever before they made up.

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwe! I loved it! It was so sweet.
I loved the part where sasuke said
“… body… just moved… on its own.”
Can't wait for more.
=)
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. really. the emails - the best, i crack up every time i read them. i am so copying this story to my desktop, so i can read it over and over. hehe!
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy kitten... I can harrass you on two sides... nyah!!! LOL Then again... Chapter 3 and 4 were incredibly insightful... Naruto's family situation is delicate to say the least... and Uchiha is treating the whole thing with the delicacy of an Elephant in a Porcelain store...nyah! Poor thing... I want to know what's next! 'curiosity killed the cat'...darn right! That's why I am insured!
person qwerty
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWW! Great chapter!
update
person monrque
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man this is one of the best AU's ever.
I needed a good laugh and I got it.
I love your stories. and like the last one
i will read this one over and over.
person charmpit
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“… body… just moved… on its own.”

Totally busted, you NaruSasu shipper you (not that your previous work wasn't already a clue, LOL)!

I love how Sakura "outed" Neji's trans-DMZ relationship with Gaara. Priceless.

I am loving this story. You are quickly becoming one of my favorite people. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter!
person Vox
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*praises, worships, adores, loves, hugs, huggles, kisses, etc. the beloved author*

Thank you - and I can't express the level of thanks in words - for making an otherwise miserable Super Bowl day something enjoyable.

Please, pretty please - with sugar, and sprinkles, and chocolate, and frosting, and cherries, and ramen on the side - keep writing.

*resumes begging for an Itachi fic*
person animelover
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! neji and gaara! i thought it was neji and itachi! and i luv itachi's reply "don't bother me with your insecurities". priceless ... absolutely priceless. ooooh, and what will naru's team do as an "emergency"?

can't wait!