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by lexjamandme

person Jelp
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww. That's so cute. I hope they get things worked out before the end of the retreat.

Still, I think it would be great if Sasuke and Naruto returned and acted like they hated each other and ended up being secret lovers, only to get caught. Naturally Itachi would know, and if the two of them were going at each other in their offices or something, Itachi would know and unlock the door with his master skeleton key. MWAHAHAHAHA...okay...I'm good. As usual, suberb chapter. I really love the ending with Naruto mumbling in his sleep about not leaving. So cute.

Looking forward to your next chapter! ~ Jelp
person narutoandsasuke
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG DONT TELL ME UR THINKIN WAT IM THINKIN CAUSE IF U ARE THEN UR BRINGIN IN SAI TO MAKE SASUKE JEALOUS AND REALIZE HIS FEELINS FOR NARUTO (OR ATLEAST THATS WHAT IM THINKIN,.....BUT WHATEVER FLOATS UR BOAT) ILL BE WAITIN FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!! I CHECK EVERY DAY SINCE I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH AND THE OTHER ONES U DID!!
person darkmousy
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
an update so quickly makes me exuberantly happy!! and i love the emails that go back forth... they are great. this is seriously an excellent story.
person digiditz
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn. This story just cannot unravel fast enough. But I don't want to rush it because I'll be sad when it's over.
person gaara89
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really good!!! Please continue this soon!

p.s

i love how you've written Itachi. It's awesome!!
person BennyPeace
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww.
person laughing hokage
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great I love the humor. Minions is wonderful.
person lo
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read one of your earlier stories and now I see that you have really grown as a writerm. I am really enjoying what you have created here and I can't wait to see more.
person Vox
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*worships the ground that you - and Itachi - walk on*
*gives the usual torch-and-pitchfork speech*
*proceeds to beg the glorious, wonderful, sure-to-be-up-for-enshrinement-by-yaoi-fans-everywhere author for an Itachi fic, because he doesn't get loved nearly enough*
Thank you. We love you.
person digiditz
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew that info was going to bite Sasuke in the ass. I am ever so please to be right.

I hope that something "wonderful" happens to Itachi by the end of this baby.