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Awwwwe bad Sasuke, bad! Poor Naru-chan. I loved this chapter. I like at the beginning where Itachi is like he should be doing something 'president-y'. It was funny.
Can't wait for more.
=)

Yeah, I think I would agree with Sasuke that he is an f-ing jerk. Man, he really knows how to screw things up. I feel really bad for Naruto, having Sasuke see his birth parents before him. How sad. I was almost crying there at the end, I felt so bad for Naruto.

As always, I look forward to your next update! ~ Jelp

love da story...just as much as i loved da other one 'for da love of his son'
update soon please

p.s: 'sunshine'= pure genius, best naruto nickname ever!

I really enjoyed this story so far. You have a wonderful feeling for your characters and you make me laugh every time, scaring the dog to death. Can't wait for more!
Slave

Write more of those emails. I think they're funny, especially the one's for Itachi.

AH! They were doing so well. I had forgotten that Sasuke asked info on Naruto... the teme
update!

This. Is.
SOGOOD.

Generally I make it a point of avoiding AU's like the plague, but I couldn't resist a harmeless peek into The Dematerialized Zone when I first read the summary, and found it very much well written, containing just the right amount of humor to make a good story happen, and with hints of something more to the author than just wanting to get the central characters together, then jumping the both of them into each other's bed (not necessarily in that order). How I hate that - that in order to find good, heart-warming, mind-blowing, very much thought out, well-written and with the author taking responsibility for a full study of the mind and ideas behind the character stories in the fanfiction area, we have to come across, and sometimes look into, sad excuses of empty twelve yearsold ideas of a world centered around (bad, since it's something one of such age cannot fully comprehend as a simple fact of life that should - does - offer insights into a complex character's mind and existence) smut travestited as literature.

I have absolutely fallen in love with this story. Your writting, your portrayal of the characters' personality, not to mention all those little things one gets in-between the lines. I *adore* it all. Your plotline - so convincing. Even your sense of humor adapts perfectly to your very unique writting style. This story is refreshing, easy-flowing, bittersweet and yet light, and no less deep in it's AU status.

Thank you for giving us this. Please do not discontinue it until all is finished. I plan on devouring everything that comes your way from now on, and very much happily antecipate it all.

Also... may I request that you put your amazing skills of soulfully writting the characters that one just cannot help but see the characters turned into deep, humanized, living creatures into stories that follow the plotline of the anime/manga? I'd really like to see what you could come up with to get Sasuke and Naruto together from where they are right now, mangaverse-wise.

Would you? Will you? And thank you once again. I really enjoyed reading your work.

i am loving this story!!!! please keep up the excellent work.

I'm baaaack *looks around* no new chapter? *pouts* ah well it hasnt even been a week yet so i'll chill :) Review!: love love love chibi naruto and kakshi and iruka as his parents struggling through college with him *sniff sniff* so beautiful! In the springtime of their youthful love! ROFL!

Sasuke and naruto's interaction continues to be wonderful (he plays the chello?! O_o) and the end part where i just know sas couldnt sleep because he was feeling guilty about earlier and naruto talking to him made him feel better aaawww (er or something similar. hey i DID read this almost a wk ago lol :D)

I LOVE THIS STORY. I have never laughed so hard in my life. I love those emails Naruto sent to Kakashi. Please write soon